Semi-protected edit request on 8 March 2021[edit]

I think this would be better as a source in the first paragraph instead of the existing one. 124.41.240.155 (talk) 11:47, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done ☎️ Churot DancePop 15:52, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 21 April 2021[edit]

Match no 19 chennai super kings vs royal challengers Bangalore match starting time is 3:30pm in wikipedia it show 7:30pm please change the time Satheesh777 (talk) 03:13, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done ☎️ Churot DancePop 03:44, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 21 April 2021 (2)[edit]

match no 19 chennai super kings vs royal challengers Bangalore starting time was incorrect please change the time Satheesh777 (talk) 04:31, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Already corrected. ☎️ Churot DancePop 11:58, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 6 May 2021[edit]

Because the league is indefinitely cancelled, please change sentences from:

to

The 2021 Indian Premier League, also known as IPL 14 or, for sponsorship reasons, Vivo IPL 2021, was the fourteenth season of the Indian Premier League (IPL)

I believe the article needs to use past tense as well. 110.137.163.125 (talk) 03:39, 6 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done, the tournament is postponed, not cancelled. The BCCI might organise it later this year. If the BCCI cancels it, then it would be correct to change it to was. ☎️ Churot DancePop 04:10, 6 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello 👋 Clog Wolf Howl 10:00, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 8 June 2021[edit]

IPL resumption and final date has been announced. Make the edit 122.164.84.208 (talk) 09:55, 8 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 11:23, 8 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 7 October 2021[edit]

Under "COVID-19 impact" section, change "worsing" to "worsening". "worsing" is not a word. 2A02:A319:8245:8C20:7D16:EE78:7CD0:805E (talk) 22:22, 7 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 DoneIVORK Talk 22:55, 7 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]


2021 Indian Premier League article in Tamil[edit]

I request any volunteers, who know Tamil very well, to update League stage (குழுநிலைச் சுற்று) paragraph in 2021 இந்தியன் பிரீமியர் லீக் ( Tamil version of 2021 Indian Premier League ) Vishwa Sundar (talk) 13:21, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ps103ankit (talk · contribs) 11:50, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is ---- well written:
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable:
    a (reference section):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage:
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy:
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable:
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate:
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2021 Indian Premier League/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk · contribs) 10:29, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Kpddg, a few comments before I continue with the full review as per GA criteria:

  1. Why do some sections only have lists/tables and no text in paragraph/prose format?
    Here I am not concerned about the lists/tables, but rather the lack of prose to support the tables or that particular section. (For some connected policy and guidelines: MOS:USEPROSE, WP:PARAGRAPH, WP:WHENTABLE, MOS:EMBED...) The sections "Teams and standings" and "Statistics" have no sentences at all. "Venues" has a single line and "League stage" also has minimal prose. Wouldn't a few explanatory sentences help? Don't a collection of only tables/lists seem less like just a collection of statistical trivia? As a GA reviewer I don't want to be going into editorial decisions, but I want to be sure that we are covering the basics like structure WP:MOS consciously. While this is not that important a factor for this GA, it would be worthwhile to note that no IPL season has achieved GA status, however some trends can be seen with regard to basic structure.
    On the other hand, if you think prose is unnecessary for any particular section mentioned above, please write down the reason/s succinctly.
  2. Do you think this should be in the first paragraph of the introduction - ... renamed as the Punjab Kings.
  3. The two tables in the 'Venue' section are aligned differently.

FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 10:29, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@FacetsOfNonStickPans, I have tried to resolve these points:
1. I've added some prose content for these sections, but can't think of or find anything more. If you have any specific ideas, do tell me.
2. It has been moved to the second paragraph.
3. Both have been aligned in the same way.
Thanks, Kpddg (talk) 14:10, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

My detailed review follows. I will continue to add points according to the progress.

Infobox
 Done Kpddg (talk) 13:04, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
There is no Player of the Series award, only the MVP. So shall I remove it from the infobox? Kpddg (talk) 13:13, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Discussed on the talk page. FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 09:52, 3 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Lead
 DoneKpddg (talk) 13:13, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Background
Personnel changes
COVID-19 impact
Venues
Teams and standings
League stage
Playoffs
Statistics
 Done Kpddg (talk) 09:19, 9 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
References
I made some improvements to cite/ref detailing. FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 09:02, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Kpddg (talk) 16:40, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Second opinion requested in the hopes of finding reviewer to take over

The nomination status is being changed to "2nd opinion" in the hopes of finding a new reviewer to take over the review. One major issue that I raised above was whether the prose is comprehensive enough and if there are enough references out there to back this up adequately. The article has been improved significantly by the nominator as per the above review, however there are some unfinished points. Thank you to whoever steps up. FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 09:02, 12 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I can do a fresh review; I should be able to post some comments later today. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:53, 18 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Images are appropriately tagged; Earwig finds no issues.

Spotchecks:

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:31, 18 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Mike Christie for picking up the review. I'll try to address these points. Kpddg (talk) 10:45, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Mike Christie, I think I have addressed the points. Kpddg (talk) 13:49, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've copyedited to address a couple of remaining points. Since the spotchecks did not come up clean, I'm going to do a few more:

Unfortunately I'm going to have to fail this because of these spotchecks -- given that I found issues on the first spotchecks, I would have needed these to come up clean to pass it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:38, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie, I can resolve these issues if given some time. Also, the instructions for users answering a second opionion say that the decision to pass or fail the review should be left to the original reviewer, or they should be contacted. Pinging FacetsOfNonStickPans. Kpddg (talk) 15:55, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I treated this as a fresh review, rather than a second opinion on a specific point of disagreement. I agree that in most cases finding errors in a review is not a cause for a fail; the nominator should get a chance to fix the issues. Failing multiple spotchecks on a second spotcheck is an immediate failure per WP:GACR; I think in these circumstances every single citation has to be checked, and that's not something that should happen at GA. You might consider posting a query at WT:GAN to get other opinions if you think this fail is unfair or inappropriate. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:13, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Since I have been pinged, just want to jot that I have left a comment on Kpddg's talk page in response. That's all. FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 19:34, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

Kpddg, hopefully this helps gives you some more idea of how the infobox can be improved and made more accurate.

As identified in the GA review, IPL does not have a 'Player of the series' however the infobox currently in use has a parameter for it. This parameter can be simply removed. Or...

'MVP' or something with more detail such as '(see MVP)' as could also be added in brackets. However since that is one of the most important of IPL awards here are some other infobox templates formatted with respect to this article which could also be used. One utilizes the "Template:Infobox sports season" while the other is the meta template "Template:Infobox" whose usage is generally not encouraged. However I have placed it to provide a comparison nevertheless.

2021 Indian Premier League
LeagueIndian Premier League
SportCricket (Twenty20)
Duration9 April – 2 May 2021
19 September – 15 October 2021
Number of matches60
Number of teams8
TV partner(s)Star Sports, Disney+ Hotstar
(see IPL Broadcasting)
Auction and personnel changes
Top draft pickChris Morris
Picked byRajasthan Royals
Season results
Season championsChennai Super Kings
  Runners-upKolkata Knight Riders
Season MVPHarshal Patel (Royal Challengers Bangalore)
List of IPL seasons
2021 Indian Premier League
LeagueIndian Premier League
Cricket formatTwenty20
Tournament format(s)Double round-robin and playoffs; 60 matches
Host(s)India
United Arab Emirates
Dates9 April – 2 May 2021
19 September – 15 October 2021
Administrator(s)Board of Control for Cricket in India (BCCI)
TV Partner(s)Star Sports, Disney+ Hotstar
(see IPL Broadcasting)
Auction and personnel changes
Most expensive playerChris Morris (RR)
Most expensive Indian playerKrishnappa Gowtham (CSK)
Season results
WinnerChennai Super Kings
Runners-upKolkata Knight Riders
Season Most Valuable Player (MVP)Harshal Patel (Royal Challengers Bangalore)
Most runsRuturaj Gaikwad (Chennai Super Kings) (635)
Most wicketsHarshal Patel (Royal Challengers Bangalore) (32)
List of IPL seasons and results
Previous2020
Next2022
www.iplt20.com

FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 12:46, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The first one seems more appropriate. I will replace the exisitng one. Though, is it possible to add this parameter to the existing one itself? If so, how can it be done? Kpddg (talk) 13:40, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kpddg, I see that you tried to add the parameter to the template "Template:Infobox cricket tournament". While you edited the documentation, you didn't add the parameter on the main template page. I went ahead and added MVP.
Now go ahead and decide whether the current template is alright for now since MVP has been inserted, or whether "Template:Infobox sports season" is still better. If you are replacing the infobox, carefully check that I haven't introduced any errors and that every label is backed up with content and references in the main article.
If you want to propose some more changes to the current template "Template:Infobox cricket tournament", have a go in your userspace/sandbox or if you have got the hang of it make changes to the main template. Before making any large scale-changes to the template you could suggest it on the template talk page first Template talk:Infobox cricket tournament.
If you want to make some changes to existing templates you can also request it here Wikipedia:Requested templates though this takes some time depending on the presence of volunteers. FacetsOfNonStickPans (talk) 09:48, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
okay, thank you Kpddg (talk) 10:43, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]