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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC) This article has languished long enough. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 23:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
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Fine here.
"...(Komisja Edukacji Narodowej)– the world's first ministry of education – he was.." Proper spacing in accordance with the hyphens.
In the first paragraph of the "Political career" section, you start a sentence with "In 1781...". In the second paragraph, you start a sentence with "On 29 May 1773...". Why the chronologic disparity?
"...office of the Writer of Lithuania..." Was he a scribe then? Either way, please elucidate.
"...a nickname bakałarz." Please write as "...a nickname: bakałarz." Also, what does this nickname mean?
You already wikilinked Familia in the first section.
"...with Russia attitude..." "...with the Russian attitude...", maybe?
"...of a Minister of War." No need for "a".
"...even after Poniatowski's access to it." Access isn't the correct word, maybe accession?
That is all.
This is as miniscule a section as any, but the content affords its own section nonetheless.
Very fine article. Once everything has been addressed and allayed, I will pass this article. Excellent work and congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 01:03, 25 June 2013 (UTC)