This page reads like a CV. It makes several comments without providing any evidence, such as:

"Deakin Law School- Australia's most well-known law faculty" - is it really? On what basis?

"While McConvill certainly is well qualified for the position [of Head of School]" - what is the basis for this statement?

Editing[edit]

I am all for triming out fluff, but this article has been stripped to the bones and now gives the impression of a total NN lawyer. Surely all the stuff about his controversial publications needs to go back in, however poorly it might be phrased? I almost listed this as an AfD because it contains nothing remotely encyclopediac at the moment. --Legis (talk - contribs) 20:35, 11 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

My comments[edit]

on the editing of this article are at the AfD, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/James McConvill. DGG (talk) 15:48, 20 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]