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September 2020

• Eurocon seems to be WP:INDISCRIMINATE—it lists all awardees at all award events in tables. The content about the awards themselves is relatively small. —I'llbeyourbeach (talk) 06:20, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
• Trans-Karakoram Tract - A region administered by China. It has a lot of mistakes and factual errors and is in need of more citations and generally more reliable citations. Taimoorahmed11 (talk) 12:37, 13 September 2020 (UTC)

 Comment: Struck part of the above, because this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 23:46, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

• Tschaikovsky Pas de Deux - 1960 ballet. Some sources are dead, and some content seems to be irrelevant. I'll work on the "notable performers" section at some point, maybe other parts of the article too. And if you're wondering the spelling of the title is intentional. Corachow (talk) 15:15, 12 September 2020 (UTC)

 Done replaced dead links, added more refs. Looks ok for now. Less Unless (talk) 05:39, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

October 2020

• Alexandra Ansanelli - American ballet dancer. Excessively detailed, poorly sourced and unclear citation style. I'll work on the contents at some point. Corachow (talk) 15:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done Trimmed some of the excessive detail. Removed blank refs. Needs a rewrite in the career section. ThinkHat (talk) 22:06, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

November 2020

• Otorhinolaryngology (for user:science vol, who asked for help on project talk) - style and readability problems. PJvanMill)talk( 22:37, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

December 2020

• Fighter Interception Unit - Blocky unsourced mess SnazzyInfinity (chat? • what I've done) 05:21, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
• Victor Mbarika - an American professor. Flagged for COI. --Opeinioluwa101 (talk)
• Joanne Wilson - US venture investor. It is a properly stated WP:COI contribution. Here is an opinion from DGG: "I can't help thinking that the article is considerably excessive in view of the accomplishments. Perhaps it could be fixed by not including mere listings as awards, (and converting the table into a list--because of accessability problems tables as deprecated unless necessary), i moving those items in the bibliography that discuss her into references in the usual format, and possible decreasing the rather extreme number of references, too many of which are barely disguised PR, and from sources which are mainly devoted to publishing press releases" (expressed here). -- --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:51, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
• List of first openly LGBT politicians in the United States — tons and tons of unreferenced claims open to lawsuits. Needs fixing ASAP. DemonDays64 (talk) 09:58, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done. I cannot believe a year has gone by on this cleanup request and no one had jumped in yet. Platonk (talk) 00:28, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• LGBT movements in the United States - issues with tone, organization of sections, multiple sections need to be condensed WhirlWithoutEnd (talk) 06:52, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done - Misc fixes. — WILDSTAR^talk 17:24, 13 December 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done Condensed the See also section by dividing entries there, shortening its length. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:36, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

January 2021

• Keroche Breweries - Kenian brewery. Promotional and needs shortening. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 14:37, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
• Zotung language - Full of broken tables, grammatical errors and incorrect style. pinktoebeans ^(talk) 12:41, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
• Children of the Lamp - A children's fantasy novel series. Lots of uncited fancruft and tone issues. Waxworker (talk) 04:48, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
• List of countries by tax rates - I've had a good go at the articles listed on this article, but they're almost all in a poor shape so any effort you can give to to just one or two articles would greatly help. Kind regards, Willbb234^Talk (please ((ping)) me in replies) 22:22, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
• Blue Valley Creamery Company – Cleanup-tagged since December 2018 with the rationale, "excessive quotes in references". North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 10:57, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done Removed some trivia and extra quotes. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:04, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

• Stefano Fantoni - Italian theoretical physicist. Multiple issues highlighted with tags. Needs to be shortened at least by 50%. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:39, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done cleaned up everything related to the refs. Still needs to be substantially shortened. Not my field of expertise. Less Unless (talk) 20:26, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done shortened lead section a bit. The article needs expert attention to evaluate scientific content. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:31, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

• Foley Downtown Historic District - Historic district on the NRHP. Bizarre phrasing, paragraph breaks, lists in paragraph/sentence form, line breaks for citations, and lack of punctuation. twink central (talk)

 Partly done - Fixed up punctuation issues and removed some archaic phrases and a red link. Don't know what to do with the lists, though. Phantasm99 (talk) 14:54, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

• Ceyhun Yılmaz - a Turkish comedian, actor, radioman and TV presenter - needs general clean up and links removed to non-existent pages --Miriumjenkins (talk) 14:22, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done general clean up -- [[MarialeegRVT (talk) 06:06, 25 January 2021 (UTC)]]

• Ratnipora - Village in Jammu and Kashmir, India, In the need of some general clean up and structuring.-kamilalibhat (talk · contribs) 5:11 , 15 January 2021(UTC)
• Teresa N. Washington - an African American academic. Original research, over-detailed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 13:49, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

• Manalapan Brook - bare URLs and clean up needed in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:52, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed — WILDSTAR^talk 14:52, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

• Draft:Muslim Disability Awareness - please clean up errors — Preceding unsigned comment added by Masteryscholar (talk • contribs)

  N Masteryscholar, I don't think there's much we can do for you. The draft is currently entirely in violation of Wikipedia's verifiability policy (which all articles must adhere to), and it seems unlikely that MDA meets Wikipedia's notability guideline for organisations - if it doesn't meet that guideline, the draft article will not be turned into an actual article. PJvanMill)talk( 18:33, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

• Aaron Gryder - article about the champion jockey reads mostly like a story (especially the opening paragraphs) with insufficient references. Submitting here with regards to story tone. JRHorse (talk) 21:40, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

 Done - Fixed story-like language and added sources. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 18:57, 16 August 2021 (UTC)

• African Fashion Foundation - written like advertising, relies on press-releases. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:31, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done Removed promotional content for the most part, though the references are still press releases. AdoTang (talk) 15:27, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

N Deleted — WILDSTAR^talk 16:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

 Note: Article was nominated for speedy deletion, contested, and moved to Draft:African Fashion Foundation — WILDSTAR^talk 16:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

• Secretlab - gaming furniture manufacturer. The style of the article is promotional. It also contains a lot of trivial details. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done Trimmed some promotional. Partnerships section still too long. ThinkHat (talk) 17:16, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

 Comment:. Also the types of chairs, reception, and awards. I may list this for deletion as basically advertising. DGG ( talk ) 21:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

 Not done the article was deleted. Less Unless (talk) 19:25, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey Less Unless - this article was recreated earlier this month and tagged for similar issues, so I'm going reopen it for now. Aranya (talk) 04:54, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

 Done I've done my best to resolve the problems and think the article is now in an acceptable state. PJvanMill)talk( 22:27, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

• Box 13 scandal — very poor writing, unencyclopedic tone. DemonDays64 (talk) 09:47, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done HeyItsFedor (talk) 13:32, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

 Done - Mostly with better historical data and citations from LBJ's article. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 16:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

• Lost Tribe – the introduction and discography need major fixing Lacon432 (talk) 21:07, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

 Note: - I started working on this and found that the article uses citations for two different bands of the same name. The one being discussed for real (the trance group) had just one minor release and little coverage. I have nominated them for deletion or redirect to the frontman. See Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Lost Tribe. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 17:19, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done - The result of the AfD discussion was to merge to the band's founder, which I completed. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 01:00, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

• Lanisha Cole - Has been tagged for over a decade that it needs additional citations for verification and I think with the recent Mike Richards and Jeopardy! news that has hopefully reached its conclusion I think some citations on her dismissal and articles (if they are any) about her thoughts on Mike's dismissal along with some about her post The Price Is Right career. Pahiy (talk) 18:38, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

• @Pahiy: Sorry, but please note that this project does not accept requests for additional sources or citations to be added to articles; I have struck the above entry. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 19:50, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

• Horchata – Bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:46, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed — WILDSTAR^talk 14:35, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

• Howard Stern – Many "sfn error: multiple targets" errors in the references section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 17:06, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed - Books section had duplicate refs, so I disabled anchor generation for those. Aranya (talk) 16:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

• Wilmer Valderrama – Bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 11:55, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done by MarnetteD — WILDSTAR^talk 15:05, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

• Greenville Symphony Orchestra – Many bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 22:09, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done flod logic (talk) 09:31, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

• SimCity – Has a few bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:18, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 01:39, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

• Suzy Q – Bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:47, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done flod logic (talk) 11:33, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

• Economy of Birmingham – Bare urls and additional reference errors. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 22:07, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 01:45, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

• Philippine peso – Bare urls and a bare link list at the end of the article that needs formatting and to be moved to the See also section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 11:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 22:57, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

• Michel Platnic - Israeli contemporary artist. Probably notable. The article looks like WP:ORIGINAL and needs shortening. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:17, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

 Done thank to many users. Less Unless (talk) 05:46, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

• Picture This (film) – stylistic cleanup overall needed, excessively long plot, inadequate amounts of sources, and the "critical reception" section is incomplete. Rosalina2427 ^(talk) 17:35, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done - Condensed plot Jennablurrs7575 (talk) 20:49, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done - I think this is done; long plot template has been removed and style changes were both made through edits of many users. I don't think the other parts of the request can be done with the existing sources, and they are unfortunately out of the scope of the WikiProject. Aranya (talk) 20:15, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

• New York City - an error in ref no 301. Less Unless (talk) 13:25, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:54, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

• Big Spring (Missouri) – Would benefit from organization into sections. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 16:00, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:44, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

• Lones Wigger – Infobox is broken. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 15:37, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed — WILDSTAR^talk 18:08, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

• Saudi Arabia - Problem with excessive overlinking originally reported by WildStar on 18 August (see below). Can be tackled with this tool. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:01, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done - Removed many repeated links and others to unnecessary basic concepts. Many of the article's links are legit though because there are lots of WP articles about the country and region. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 17:27, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

• Max Staegemann - please help correct the errors in the text. Less Unless (talk) 12:02, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done by Niceguyedc and Plastikspork. Less Unless (talk) 11:43, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

• Falan Andrea - This article may be written from a fan's point of view, rather than a neutral point of view. Nirdid (talk) 10.17, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done per Nirdid's edit summary. — WILDSTAR^talk 19:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

• Fauna of Louisiana – Many bare urls in references. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:09, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done - converted, marked some as dead. Less Unless (talk) 12:48, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

• Hans Fährmann - This article requires several fixes: organization, needs an infobox, headings (capitalization, placement, wording), bare URL, layout (large paragraphs) and style. — WILDSTAR^talk 16:47, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done - by Awker22— Preceding unsigned comment added by Taeluta (talk • contribs) 18:52, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

• Saudi Arabia - bare URL in references section, hence notice at top. Tinton5 (talk) 20:47, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: Article is extremely overlinked. To assist in the duplicate link cleanup, you can use this tool. — WILDSTAR^talk 17:41, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed - The notice in the article was placed two months ago and if there were many bare URLs then, it looks like the community fixed most of them. I found only one remaining and fixed it myself, so as of right now there are no more bare URLs in the article. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 18:24, 16 August 2021 (UTC)

I originally said "Done" above and other people have changed my comment to "Partly Done" and then "Fixed" because of the change in topic. That's inefficient and it also enables other people to speak with my voice. The answer here is to close the first request about bare URL's, which I really did fix. I will start a new entry on the over-linking problem (see above) and someone can fix it and say they did so with their own voice. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:57, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

• DealStreetAsia - needs to be reviewed for neutral point of view Sagekreyol (talk) 03:45, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

 Done Taeluta (talk) 23:04, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

• Diablada, Diablada (Bolivia) - music genre infobox should not be used, as both of them are not a musical genres, but a masked dances, whose music uses other musical genres. Solidest (talk) 17:41, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

   Note: - I wonder if it necessary to have a separate article for Bolivia's version (Diablada (Bolivia)), because that country is mentioned extensively in the original Diablada article. Perhaps a merge? An attempt to transform the specific Bolivia article to a music genre beyond the dance seems half-hearted to me. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:32, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

  No, I'm unfortunately not familiar enough with them. I work with infoboxes of musical genres, and a cursory checkup of the sources only found out that the term denotes dance and does not refer to a particular musical style. There's also History of the Diablada tho, which was already nominated to merge once Talk:Diablada#Merge Solidest (talk) 16:33, 25 June 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: with a ping to @Solidest:. Except for minor attempts to include music genre terminology, the two articles at Diablada and Diablada (Bolivia) are nearly identical, while History of the Diablada repeats info from both as well. I have initiated the merger proposal process for at least two of them at Talk:Diablada#Merger proposal. If nobody responds for a few weeks I can then do the merge myself, but if anyone resists we may need tough discussions on why duplicate info is inefficient. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:49, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

 Done See the discussion at Talk:Diablada#Merger proposal, where we ended up with support for merging an absolute mess of six different articles into the main Diablada. The original request about music infoboxes has resulted in an extensive cleanup and massive merge process. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 20:23, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

• Voorhees Town Center - a few bare URLs in references and minor clean up needed. Tinton5 (talk) 20:53, 10 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done — WILDSTAR^talk 22:31, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

• Sex segregation in Iran - couple of bare urls. Less Unless (talk) 15:06, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 17:57, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Portal:Maps/Topics – Would benefit from copy editing to create a single list that omits duplicate links, while providing a highly reader-friendly format to facilitate easier navigation. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 13:48, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 20:00, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Missouri Coteau – Broken navbox in the External links section. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 11:07, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed It was an extra "[[" in Template:Canadian Prairies. Platonk (talk) 13:08, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Barbara Heinemann Landmann - Needs to be completely reformatted and copyedited. ~ฅ(ↀωↀ=)neko-chan^nyan 17:59, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: - There is an exact copy of this article at: [1]; not sure which site copied which. I have been around WP for a long time and have never seen a more preposterous candidate for the WP:TNT process. It looks like a direct copy of a high school student's research paper. I suppose Ms. Landmann is eligible for an article because she has been covered by biographers, but this travesty needs to be reduced by 99%. I could help as part of a team effort but it may be an uphill battle if we get reverted by the article's fans. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:28, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

@Doomsdayer520: from the bottom of the page you linked: "Kiddle encyclopedia articles are based on selected content and facts from Wikipedia, edited or rewritten for children." The website seems to have copied their article from here, but they seem to be following Wikipedia's licensing terms judging by the attribution statement at the bottom. Definitely agree that our article needs an extensive rewrite though. Aranya (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

 Done, except for an issue with converting references to footnotes. I reduced the article to basic biographical facts, which made it probably 80% shorter. Most of it was about the general history of her religious group and deemed irrelevant for this one person's specific biography. I believe the whole thing was copied from a church publication. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 16:57, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

• A. M. Turaz - Needs Citations for verification . Surya^{beej   ⋠talk⋡} 07:25, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

 Not done per scope of this project. — WILDSTAR^talk 12:08, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

• Jan Metternich - German singer. Looks like WP:TOOSOON, but I may be wrong. Too many details. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:26, 24 February 2021 (UTC)

 Note: tried to address the detail a bit. I'm also unsure of Metternich's notability after reviewing the sources, so I've opened an AfD discussion. Aranya (talk) 15:16, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

N Deleted Aranya (talk) 15:10, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Drako Motors - Manufacturer of electric sports cars. Reads entirely as an advertisement, and I feel that a lot of this article is impressive-sounding statistics that don't really mean anything, but I don't know anything about cars. Needs copyediting, and citations need re-formatting to have further information. Waxworker (talk) 08:40, 6 June 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done - reworded the lead and replaced and removed unnecessary sources. Not too comfortable working in this topic area, so I've added a new advert tag due to the excessive detail on their main product. Aranya (talk) 15:54, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done, actually, I went ahead and boldly removed most of the detailed statistics on their main product. Aranya (talk) 17:32, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Lee Labrada - Cuban bodybuilder. Too commercial, and has no references. Will also need to be split into multiple sections since it is too hard to read. May also include original research. -- Phantasm99 (talk)

   Done I found a source and reduced the article to what I could reference to that source, so it is now BLP-compliant and no longer advert-like. PJvanMill)talk( 16:15, 12 August 2021 (UTC)

• Animal Rights National Conference - I removed some of the more promotional areas, but could use another editor's review. Animal Rights Hall of Fame section I wasn't sure if that should be removed. Once cleaned up, I think the Advert. tag could be removed. Rievebug (talk) 19:38, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done: Removed the Advert tag. The article does not have a promotional tone at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 11:00, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

•  Done Struck the entry at this time. Cleanup issues have essentially been addressed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 13:47, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
•  Fixed Late-comer, here. I fixed the article. It was horrible. Details on talk page. Platonk (talk) 03:17, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• Technische Hochschule Ingolstadt - University of applied sciences in Germany. Lists with years should be turned to prose, the content should be shortened to remove trivia, references can be improved. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:14, 14 November 2020 (UTC)

N I do not think this article can be saved, and consequently I've (re-)nominated it for deletion. PJvanMill)talk( 15:26, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Result: kept. Sources were found. PJvanMill)talk( 18:29, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

in my experience, all pages for genuine European universities with a significant history can be rescued fairly easily. Other areas can be much harder to find sources. DGG ( talk ) 21:14, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

 Partly done - Style/layout fixes. — WILDSTAR^talk 16:32, 11 December 2020 (UTC)

•  Note: Struck the entry at this time. Article presently has no maintenance tags pertinent to this project, and nothing on the talk page suggesting problems with the article. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 13:51, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

• Saint Georges, Delaware - a couple of bare URLs in references section. Tinton5 (talk) 07:04, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done I hope you are enjoying your travels through Delaware Tinton5 :-) 16:10, 1 November 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MarnetteD (talk • contribs)

• Dunleith, Delaware, some clean up needed and bare URLs found in references section. Tinton5 (talk) 06:30, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done 16:10, 1 November 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MarnetteD (talk • contribs)

• Oak Orchard, Delaware - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:10, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done — WILDSTAR^talk 14:05, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• Robert Shepherd - Bare urls used as embedded links (see WP:CS:EMBED), too many redlinks, much uncited content, and reads like it was copied from somewhere else (bio? obit?). Platonk (talk) 05:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done I have addressed all the issues and reorganized the article to comply with MOS. The info is mostly collected from several sources which I have found and added as refs. Less Unless (talk) 20:05, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

• Manhattan Mini Storage - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 23:44, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done Both links were dead and have been tagged as such. MarnetteD|Talk 04:17, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

• Rohit Shetty the subheadings in Career section are not neutral. Or is it me? Less Unless (talk) 17:56, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done — Removed excessive detail from sub-headings. Less Unless, it being so close to Halloween... leaves me wondering if that was a "trick" question?  :) — WILDSTAR^talk 18:25, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

• Chevrolet Vega – Several references with missing or empty titles. — WILDSTAR^talk 17:13, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

@WildStar: Those are all citations from 20-50 year old print magazines. I'm not sure they're available online (to get a title). We could, however, change the format of the citation so that the 'red font' in the references section goes away. Let me know if you think that would help, and I'll do that for you. Platonk (talk) 15:24, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Platonk, since all of those CS1 style references fail to provide the needed bibliographic data (title), I believe it would be acceptable to improve them per WP:CITEVAR, retaining as much (if not all) of the information already there. If you feel the need, please feel free to discuss it further on the article's talk page. All the best and thank you! — WILDSTAR^talk 16:58, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed Platonk (talk) 19:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

• Oxford English Dictionary - Many citations appear broken (e.g. [18]:xx). These may be referring to a specific page of the cited resource, and should be moved to into the citation as per WP:CITE. Also, any of the revisions of the OED mentioned in the text contain question marks (e.g. ?th impression). I don't have easy access to the find the correct revision numbers. aaPle (talk) 03:04, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

 Done – Struck the above at this time. I fixed the last two instances of bare urls used as sources for notes in the article (diff, diff), and the (e.g. ?th impression) matter would require edits that may require significant research, which is not under the particular purview of this project; this latter aspect may be better addressed by posting a request at the Guild of Copy Editors' Requests page. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 01:11, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• SpaceX Starship - An article about in-development space rocket. Really long with no consistency, many grammartical errors and have a lot of unnesscesary details. It should be paid more attention as it have 20k+ view per day. DrifAssault (talk) 07:02, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

   Done thanks to push by CactiStaccingCrane, the article has been completely reworked on its way to through a successful GAN and some other review processes. I think most of these fundamental issues have been addressed. Aranya (talk) 14:42, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

• University of Luxembourg - Absolute mess of an article, uncited and very biased. Absolutely in need of cleanup. Ardenter (talk) 16:11, 12 February 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done shortened lead section. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:10, 12 February 2021 (UTC)

 Done – Has been addressed, with edits such as this that removed 19,001 bytes of information in March 2021, with the edit summary, "stubbed article and removed the eleven maintenance templates as an alternative to PROD, working on rewrite". North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:46, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• Annalee Skarin – needs significant concision. KidAd talk 03:00, 5 February 2021 (UTC)

 Done – Struck the above entry. Appears to have been addressed, with edits such as this that removed 17,734 bytes of information in March 2021, with the edit summary, "see previous; this is not the bible". North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:39, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba the Movie: Mugen Train — lots of unsourced/poorly sourced information, doesn't conform with MOS:FILM with too many sections/tables that do not belong. Alex Tenshi (talk|contribs) 15:43, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

 Done – Has been addressed by various editors since the time this was posted here. See this difference between revisions as an example. The article is well-sourced at this time as well. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 00:56, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• Vere Bird Jr. - Really messy article, made back then in 2011 and recently only been touched on by me, false rated GA, which i reduced to a C class. MoonlightVector 16:10, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: MoonlightVector, there is a process, outlined here, if you believe the GA no longer merits its current status and needs to be reassessed. — WILDSTAR^talk 17:00, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: MoonlightVector, Just noticed the reassessment that you indeed did start. :) — WILDSTAR^talk 17:48, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done - Cleanup, mostly the lead. — WILDSTAR^talk 20:17, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

 Resolved - Article appears to have been sufficiently cleaned up and has passed a GA reassessment. — WILDSTAR^TALK 12:37, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

• Flag Officer Commanding Eastern Fleet - bare URLs and missing titles that won't repair using reFill because most are links to PDFs. Platonk (talk) 04:51, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 18:56, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

• WHYY-TV - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 00:31, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:23, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

• School bus - a few bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:01, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:33, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

• Sky Express (Greece) - Several references with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^talk 13:29, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:33, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

• Talk:Jun Hong Lu - need to remove all the discussion at this talk page as they are outdated.WezSchultz (talk) 14:38, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

   Not done. @WezSchultz: we usually keep old discussions so that there is a record of the article's development. We can archive discussions if the page is becoming too large (per WP:ARCHIVENOTDELETE), but this doesn't seem to be the case. Bridget (talk) 16:33, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

• Laffy Taffy - footnote out of place/duplicate references found. Tinton5 (talk) 23:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
•  Done Less Unless (talk) 20:40, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
• Lemonhead (candy) - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 23:45, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done per Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Links_and_ID_numbers. MarnetteD|Talk 19:47, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

• OneMain Financial - Has 14 URLs (citations or external links?) that were just thrown in there in a row. Platonk (talk) 09:28, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
•  Done Less Unless (talk) 19:23, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
• Aftab Pureval - the article needs NPOV-proofreading. Less Unless (talk) 15:48, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Removed leftover campaign blurbs and non-notable events; plus general cleanup and copy-editing. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:50, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

• Legion of Heroes - Article contains too many redlinks. It's unlikely that all the cast and crew listed for this 1942 Spanish film would meet the nobility requirements. — WILDSTAR^talk 17:15, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done removed all the links - I couldn't find any info about any of the actors. Less Unless (talk) 14:28, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

• Chen Jianqiang - been trying to correct the ref errors, but somehow it doesn't work. Need your help.Less Unless (talk) 21:09, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  •  Fixed. @Less Unless: Access date needs a day, month and year. Was missing day; I added it. Platonk (talk) 22:01, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Platonk, thank you! That's weird because I think I remember adding just a month and it worked... Will reread the guidelines again. Less Unless (talk) 14:37, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
• Tiny Tim (musician)- References with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 14:23, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:48, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

• Girl from the North Country (musical) - References with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 12:50, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done filled bare URLs, but the coding at references can be improved further. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:54, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:48, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

• Company Names Tribunal - References with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 12:45, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:48, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

• Piscatawaytown, New Jersey, some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:21, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done fixed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:19, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

• Lady of the Lake - Reference with bare URL. — WILDSTAR^TALK 02:01, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done MarnetteD|Talk 02:41, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

• John F. Kennedy - References bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 01:22, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:59, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

• Century: Age of Ashes – Needs formatting to correct spacing and remove excessive bold typeface. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 03:15, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done — WILDSTAR^TALK 14:36, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

• Wavetec - company article. The company is probably not notable, multiple cases of WP:REFBOMB, unnecessary links at the "External links" section. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:35, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Comment the article was nominated for the deletion. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 23:50, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

 Not done Deleted. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:56, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

• List of fact-checking websites - Visually a mess, format of entries is inconsistent, references mid-sentence, missing trans-title parameters in citations. Platonk (talk) 21:50, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done all the above mentioned.Less Unless (talk) 20:19, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

• Marie Skłodowska-Curie Actions - bare urls in Ref section. Less Unless (talk) 13:09, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

 Fixed — WILDSTAR^TALK 16:41, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

• Mazowe Boys High School - Article follows very little guidelines and breaks the manual of style. TheXug (talk) 22:14, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done Removed 2 sections, corrected the refs, minor copy-editing. Needs more ce. Less Unless (talk) 14:52, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done Removed uncited UNDUE section, changed unnecessary lists to prose, added wikilinks. Platonk (talk) 18:02, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

 Done with the participation of Less Unless, Platonk, Rusalkii and yours truly. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:21, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

• BWM Architects - Austrian architecture company. The article needs to be cleaned up according to WP:NOTCATALOG. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:10, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

 Comment:I've noticed that all of the links are for the catalogue section, and once you delete that, it becomes completely unsourced. As such, I'm nominating it for deletion.

 Not done Deleted. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:22, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

• Listia - Online auction marketplace that uses credits instead of money. Lots of unreliable/primary refs and original research, I've already removed a bunch of links to individual auctions for Amazon gift cards. Waxworker (talk) 13:37, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done Original research has been removed, still has a lot of primary refs though. HoneycrispApples (talk) 21:53, 5 June 2021 (UTC)

 Done with the participation from Bridget, HoneycrispApples, David Gerard and yours truly. I also added "Update" tag as some parts of the article might not reflect the current state of things. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 09:38, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

• Jasmine Dotiwala - British media executive. Article strays wildly from areas where the subject may be regarded as notable. Content is largely promotional & poorly structured. Stroness (talk) 19:41, 24 February 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done trimmed down promotion, added citation requests. A lot more cleanup is needed. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:37, 27 February 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done cleaned up 'early life' and rolled education into it. Stroness (talk) 19:13, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

 Done; article has been rewritten and sources have been provided for most of the remaining content. Bridget (talk) 17:49, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

• Window to Paris - the article is absolutely unencyclopedic. --Владимир Бежкрабчжян (talk) 05:45, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

   Done No longer unencyclopedic, but I'm afraid it has become a stub. PJvanMill)talk( 11:51, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

• Charles Neely - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 21:38, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:43, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

• Darrian Beavers - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 21:21, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done. Platonk (talk) 10:24, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

• Litiana Kalsrap - Several references (1, 2, 3, and 5), instead of the normal formatting for archived urls, are cited as if web.archive.org was their original location Helloimahumanbeing (talk) 18:52, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

• Peter Carl Goldmark - Reference and EL with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 00:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

• Darby Crash - Reference with bare URL. — WILDSTAR^TALK 00:28, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

• Greg Lake - Several references with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 00:13, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

• Majida Al-Mufti - Circassian activist. Probably notable. The style of the article is quite promotional. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 14:37, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done by Bridget. Less Unless (talk) 09:32, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

• Multiverse (EdTech) - British educational company. References should be evaluated, there are too many references now for such a small text, and not all of them are entirely independent. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:29, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Comment The article was nominated for the deletion. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:54, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

N Deleted per afd and moved to draftspace. — WILDSTAR^TALK 05:59, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

• Hayden Bridge (Springfield, Oregon) — could use a once-over to ensure compliance with the MOS. Thanks! Tyrone Madera (talk) 21:22, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

  Hi Tyrone Madera, the article looks fine at a first glance. I made some minor adjustments to the formatting and removed some external links per WP:ELNO. Do you have any specific concerns about its compliance with the MOS? Bridget (talk) 19:30, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

  Hi Bridget! No specific concerns, just wanted someone to double-check me to make sure that the article was following the relevant guidelines. If you haven't seen anything that stands out to you, I would mark this as done. Thank you for looking it over!Tyrone Madera (talk) 20:44, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

   Resolved - no specific problem identified, the article seems fine to me as well, though I don't have the entire MOS in my head. PJvanMill)talk( 22:42, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

  @PJvanMill Lol, no need. Thank you! Tyrone Madera (talk) 03:41, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

• Norrenberger Financial Group - Nigerian financial company. Not sure if this should be cleaned up (due to WP:PROMO or nominated for the deletion. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 08:42, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: this wikipage is PR --Devokewater ^(talk) 05:03, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

 Not done @Devokewater: thanks for expressing your point of view. Moved it to the draft. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:32, 24 December 2021 (UTC)

• Cold Sunday - This article has been tagged since July 2009 for lacking inline citations. I think it may be time to have this fixed up a bit. Pahiy (talk) 03:48, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

 Not done. @Pahiy: I struck your entry above. Per the header atop this page, this project "does not accept requests for additional sources or citations to be added to articles". North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 21:03, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

• Chris Strait - bare URLs reference clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 20:27, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 13:11, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Ghosts of Abu Ghraib - bare urls. Less Unless (talk) 20:34, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:54, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

• Joseph Lelyveld – Sources section consists entirely of bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 08:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done AreyouMach-ingme (talk) 05:23, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Mae Muller - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 03:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:59, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Caroline Williams - bare URLs in references section. Tinton5 (talk) 03:09, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:59, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Adidas Stan Smith - bare URLs and reference formatting needed. Tinton5 (talk) 00:30, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Private police - bare URL found in references. Tinton5 (talk) 21:11, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:20, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

• Global Footprint Network – Has some bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 21:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:20, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

• Lily Ann Carol - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 06:07, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 13:43, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

• Haji Nabi Shariff – Article apparently created by a relative of the subject. Needs extensive rewriting for neutrality if we're keeping it. –Skywatcher68 (talk) 16:17, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

N Deleted under A7. Less Unless (talk) 21:21, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

• Humboldt 7 massacre - Oh boy, everything. Poor grammar, improper formatting, a few improper citations, a suspiciously low number of citations and references for such a long article, what seems like NPOV, you name it. AdoTang (talk) 18:27, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done I decided to mop this one up myself for no reason. I think the article is at least readable now; though it might need more work in some places, I think it's clean enough for me to mark this as done. AdoTang (talk) 21:15, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

• Casualty recording - Has a severe case of external-link-itis and has turned into a directory. Platonk (talk) 04:40, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:53, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

• Penny Marshall - References and external links with bare URLs. — WILDSTAR^TALK 14:07, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

 Partly done - converted all the bare urls, but there's a ref called Ibid that is used about 10 times and is not citing anything. Also I've noticed original research and npov violations. Less Unless (talk) 08:14, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

 Comment: Thank you Less Unless for the cleanup! — From what I can surmise, using Ibid is to indicate they are referencing the same source as the previous reference. — WILDSTAR^TALK 14:14, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

@WildStar and Less Unless: I went ahead and really boldly reverted the Biography section to an older version because of concerns with prose and sourcing. I think the sources with ibid were OK, it was more the heavy reliance on things like Baidu Baike, thepaper.cn, and IMDB/FindAGrave.com (per WP:RSP). The two sections analyzing her films are still there, I just moved them to separate section tagged for OR. I didn't change any recent reference additions and formatting changes, but I know I undid a lot of edits so please revert if you think I misjudged. Bridget (talk) 16:25, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Marking this as  Done Bridget (talk) 04:42, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

• Ice cream - Article has a serious case of MOS:OVERLINKing and has turned into a SEAOFBLUE. Needs the wikilinking to be toned down... a lot. Platonk (talk) 20:46, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done (I think) - Reduced number of links. May need a second pass with a fresh pair of eyes. I see blue everywhere now! Thanks Platonk!  :) — WILDSTAR^TALK 22:53, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

So much better. I was so hopeful looking at your diff, but surprised to still see a lot of blue. You removed around 16 just the first paragraph and the diff went on and on and on! Sorry to turn your world blue on you. ;) Thank you. I couldn't have done it without blowing up on whoever did that to the article. Platonk (talk) 04:30, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

• List of Christmas films - Some of the tables are by default sorted alphabetically, and others by date; needs a consistent style. Several non-bluelinked entries without citations. Related discussion over at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Film#"See also" sections. Platonk (talk) 19:42, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

   Partly done. Redlinks and no-links have been handled. Left remaining are the inconsistent sorting styles. Platonk (talk) 04:33, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

   Comment: I think it makes sense for adaptations of a particular work (here A Christmas carol or The Nutcracker and the Mouse King) to be sorted by year, while the other tables should be sorted alphabetically. That would mean only the section "Short films" needs to be changed. Also, per WP:CSC, this list should follow and mostly does follow the "every entry has to be notable" criterion, which means unlinked entries and entries that are redirects to group articles should be removed. PJvanMill)talk( 11:41, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

   Done, unless someone thinks the "adaptations of" sections should be sorted alphabetically too. PJvanMill)talk( 12:45, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

• Senreve - American company. The style of the article is promotional, there are several cases of WP:REFBOMB. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 07:02, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

 Not done - article has been draftified mainly due to COI issues, see Draft:Senreve. Bridget (talk) 19:47, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

• Zack Weiner - US sports executive. The tone of the article is promotional. I also have doubts about his notability as a person. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:51, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

N Deleted after going through AfD. Bridget (talk) 19:47, 28 January 2022 (UTC)