11:4711:47, 16 February 2019diffhist+383
Athletes and domestic violence in the United States
Rewrite the lead to present the problem as one of public knowledge of the perpetration of domestic violence off the field, rather than just the commission of the crime. The problem is the publicity in addition to the public's changing intolerance of the crime. Also Globalize tag.
13:4013:40, 15 February 2019diffhist+1,767
Crime in New Zealand
Rework the lead section and move un-sourced content into the body of the article. Less is more! A smaller lead section now means more can be added later. Rapidly dating statistics from 2018 should not be left in the lead section.
12:0312:03, 14 February 2019diffhist+2,748
Sumner, New Zealand
Add some places where citations are needed to verify statements in the article. It's not that the statements are wrong, its that the facts need to be supported, rather than being rumor or editorial opinion.
11:4511:45, 13 February 2019diffhist+1,936
HMS Pandora (1833)
Add information about HMS Pandora surveying New Zealand while under the command of Commander Drury between 1850 and 1856. Add notes where dates and citations needed for precision and where further explanation needed.
12:5312:53, 5 February 2019diffhist+59
Crime in New Zealand
→See also: Add 2 more apparently crime related "... in New Zealand" articles to see also list. Rating is Start class of High importance.
12:4212:42, 5 February 2019diffhist+305
Alcohol in New Zealand
Lead paragraph is inconsistent and not supported by rest of article. Captain Cook first brewed beer in 1773, and sealers and whalers were in New Zealand, with alcohol shortly afterwards. Missionaries didn't arrive until the 19th century. Minors needing parental consent to consume is inconsistent with no minimum consumption age...
3 February 2019
11:4611:46, 3 February 2019diffhist+530
Crime in New Zealand
→See also: Add 15 apparently crime related "... in New Zealand" articles to see also list. Rating is from B class to Stub, any importance.
10:5910:59, 3 February 2019diffhist+1,145
Crime in New Zealand
Add new lead sentence: Crime in New Zealand has its origins in English criminal law, that the New Zealand parliament initially codified in statute in 1893. (This statement is verified in the body of the article in a new first section. →Basis for New Zealand criminal law: )
03:2603:26, 3 February 2019diffhist+1,350
Speed limits in New Zealand
Tag Lead that contains lots of information not in the body of the article. Tag places where citations may be needed, with reasons why. Focuses on current speed limit issues about increasing to 110 km/h. Does not cover historical limits before 1975. E.g. Traction engines, tractors.
01:2001:20, 3 February 2019diffhist+228
Crime in New Zealand
→Law enforcement: Need citations for who is responsible for cybercrime - needs a definition, if it is not crime.
01:0901:09, 3 February 2019diffhist+1,039
Crime in New Zealand
→Addressing the drivers of crime: Better sources needed for links to content on the Ministry of Justice website because the website has been restructured and the content no longer exists. May be better as citations of official documents or media releases. Undue weight to enacting Alcohol legislation.
2 February 2019
23:4723:47, 2 February 2019diffhist+800
Crime in New Zealand
→Gender: Tag improper synthesis that the vast majority of crime is committed by males because most offenders who are apprehended for those crimes are male, even though most crime is not solved and most offenders are not apprehended. Gender only known for certain after offender apprehended. Compare Schrodinger's Cat paradox.
09:3909:39, 2 February 2019diffhist+771
Crime in New Zealand
→Crime statistics: Original research for Crime Rates because a different population estimate has been used than the one in the cited source to calculate rates which are not in source and inconsistent with rates in sources