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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 16:32, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:32, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

• "Play so well that the Canadian fans when they will leave Forum will wait for you when you get on the bus after the game and admire you." Can you double-check this quote in the ref? It reads rather oddly but maybe that's how he said it.

That's really the only issue I found. Once that's looked at I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:37, 17 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Given it was a Russian speaking in English, or a bad translation to English of a Russian quote, I'm not surprised it reads so poorly.  ;) I will have to make a quick stop at the library to verify the quote, but that may not happen today. Thanks for the review! Resolute 19:09, 17 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good. If nothing's found then the quote can always be shortened to anything that needs to be tweaked can be. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:26, 20 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Bah, forgot to comment last night... The quote in the article is verbatim from the book referenced. I double checked it last night, and it is accurate as presented. However, if you think using only part of the quote would help the article, feel free to make a change as desired. Thanks! Resolute 15:36, 20 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Since it's verbatim I won't worry about it, and as a result I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:19, 21 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]