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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:48, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! It's great to review another work of yours. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:48, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:10, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Early life
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 01:42, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Olympic career
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 01:42, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Bonanno made the environment possible for elite athletes. The other names were a short list of the kind of elite athletes who Jenner trained with, Hampton, Phillips and Wilkins won Olympic Gold Medals, Powell, Wilkins and Feuerbach held the world record in their respective events. Trackinfo (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Alright. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
At the time this was written, every word was literally being critiqued. Over-sourcing was necessary. Trackinfo (talk) 02:22, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I see. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Table reference is [1] but there is not a convenient place to post the source on the table without having a dangling number.Trackinfo (talk) 02:18, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
May be a line can precede the table, something indicating that this is a table with details of her athletic achievements, and then you put the ref. at the end of the line? Just to ensure that no information is challenged. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 22:47, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
 DoneTrackinfo (talk) 02:21, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Post-Olympic career
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 02:00, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 02:08, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 05:19, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Removed unsourced sentence. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 22:42, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 02:59, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Plus a lot more. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:51, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Personal life
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:21, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:05, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:08, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Plus a lot more. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:52, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Gender transition
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:14, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:30, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Plus a lot more. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:49, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Sources

Per this revision [2]

Note: Did a bunch. Can you double check them now? ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 08:19, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
102, 106 ("US", not "Us"),
Note: Us Weekly is their namestyle, not US Weekly. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:27, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Oops, missed that! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
152–3, 156, 168, 170, 173–4, 182 need proper formatting
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 08:19, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 05:18, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Barring any other source, it establishes the picture on the cover and the credit on the show Trackinfo (talk) 02:12, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done those. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 06:35, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 05:42, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 03:59, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done one. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 05:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done a bunch. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 06:38, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 10:41, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Having trouble accessing Checklinks site tonight. ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 08:19, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed some manually, and archived some manually. Cheers! ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 13:05, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks to you both for fixing these plus lots more. I feel this has the potential for an FAC, so make sure the sources are in order. The prose looks FA-standard to me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:24, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Sainsf. Done. Cheers! ((u|Checkingfax)) {Talk} 13:04, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Great job Checkingfax! The references look lots better now, but will require a more thorough check if you plan an FAC. I am glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:38, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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