"at Southern Cross Stadium, Tuggeranong, before" notice the comma. From now on, please refer to the stadium and not include "Tuggeranong" as the reader already knows where it is.
Done
"The Front Gallery and Cafe" Is that one proper noun, or should "Cafe" be de-capped? Same with "Tattoo Artist North Lyneham"
Done. Yes, both are proper nouns. But it should have been Cafe and Halley" not "Gallery and Cafe". Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please please or ((Nowrap|)) in or around dates to keep them together.
Done, but Good Articles do not require strict MOS conformance. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"The team had seven new skaters in 2011. The 2011 team was captained by Dr. Hell. The squad's 2011 vice captains were Annethrax and Rainbow Spite." --> "Seven new skaters joined the 2011 squad, which was captained by Dr. Hell; the squad vice captains were Annethrax and Rainbow Spite."
I'm not sure "The season featured three bouts, including the finale. The second bout sold out within days." --> "Including the finale, the season featured three bouts, the second of which were sold out within days."