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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 18:56, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:56, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
The article is easily GA quality, and I'll go ahead and pass it. It would probably pass FAC without too much trouble, if you're interested in taking it there. I have a few points noted below, but these are not issues for a GA assessment. A fascinating article, professionally written, and a very interesting read.
The establishment of Gowa was part of a radical restructuring of South Sulawesi society by which wet rice cultivation intensified rapidly. Likewise, early Gowa was a largely agrarian polity with no direct access to the coastline: I don't follow the "likewise"; what is the connection between these two points?
Older historiography has generally taken the view: can we put some date boundaries to this?
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:07, 2 January 2018 (UTC)