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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source are reliable as far as I can determine.

• What's the date of the artwork depicted in the infobox? It looks modern, so I'm doubtful that it can be out of copyright.
• "(hilaf-i üslub-i şu'ara-yi zemanedür)": this is a translation of the previous phrase? Suggest putting it in a footnote if so.
• "This can be inferred from the fact that Fuzuli wrote a mukhammas deduced from the matla of one of Habibi's own ghazals": it's OK to have the occasional unusual word linked rather than explained, but this is incomprehensible to a reader unfamiliar with the field. Can we give some parenthetical explanations?

I've copyedited a bit, rather than list minor emendations. The above are the only issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:26, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie: Thank you for the review!

1) I don't know what the date for the artwork is, but it shouldn't be older than 40-50 years old, I'm not sure if it's even copyrighted as it's more like a poster standing outside on Nizami Museum's walls.

2) I'm not sure what that is as it was added by another user. I've deleted it as it seems to be out of place.

3) Done!

Let me know if there are any other issues. — Golden ^{call me maybe?} 14:23, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've struck two of the points. I would expect the artwork to be copyrighted, so I think the choices are to either upload it locally to en-wiki and add a fair use rationale, crediting the copyright to an unknown author, or to delete it from the article. To be honest I don't think a fair use rationale would work -- the reader doesn't gain any significant understanding from the image -- so I would recommend deleting it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:28, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Deleted. — Golden ^{call me maybe?} 14:30, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:34, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]