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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

• "damage totaled to $8 million (1993 USD) was reported." - Why isn't that damage figure on the infobox?
  • Added. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• "threaten the Baja California Peninsula[6] At 1200 UTC September 21, Hurricane Lidia" - There is no period at the end of that sentence (before reference #6)
  • Good catch. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• "Heading towards mainland Mexico[1] the hurricane weakened" - you should probably add a comma before reference #1
  • Added. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• "in which Lida only a mid-level Category 2 hurricane." - Typo
  • It's a grammar problem not a spelling issue. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• No, its a typo because Lidia is misspelled.--12george1 (talk) 00:11, 25 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed that. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}
• "was issued for areas below La Pza." - another typo
  • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• "In addition, one injury were reported." - Grammar error; switch to: "In addition, one injury was reported."
  • Shoot. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• In the references, at least add Guiney's first name, which would become John Guiney. [1]
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• In reference #2: "Pasch, Robert;" - "Robert Pasch"? You mean "Richard Pasch"?
  • Yeah. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}
• In reference #6, a similar problem occurs; "Lawrence, Max" -> "Lawrence, Miles"
  • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• In reference #11: "Pash, Richard J." - typo
  • Corrected. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
• Switch "David Roth" to "Roth, David" in reference #14 to remain consistent with other references.
  • Alright. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}