in the lead, "He took a pragmatic approach to the issue of the proper agency" - would this work: "He took a pragmatic approach to resolving the issue of the proper agency?
I don't know if I'd go so far as to say "resolved". See what you think of the new wording. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:53, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
in the lead, "a non-profit research organization to provide advice and support to the Department of Defense's scientific and technological research efforts formed by ten universities". Would this work: "a non-profit research organization established to provide advice and support to the Department of Defense's scientific and technological research efforts formed by ten universities"?
"and took a pragmatic approach to the custody issue" - this seems a little unclear. In what way was it pragmatic and which agency did he support to maintain custody?
Rewrote this. See if it is clearer now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:53, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
this sentence is a little awkward: "This was despite the fact that, even after Operation Greenhouse, the processes involved in thermonuclear reactions were not fully understood, and the Super design might never work."
"McCormack transferred to the United States Air Force on 25 July 1950". Do we know why?
Not for sure. At the time it was possible for Army and Navy officers to voluntarily transfer. I believe - but cannot prove - that the Super controversy made his career in the Army problematic. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:53, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"He was called to testify at the Oppenheimer security hearing". Do we know whether or not he believed that Oppenheimer was a security risk, or what he said at the hearing?
Yes! Added a bit more. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:53, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
Overall:
a Pass/Fail:
Looks good, congratulations on another GA. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:40, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]