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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:25, 22 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Happy to take up this review. In the meantime, I'd really appreciate it if you could take up one of my many current GANs that might as well stall for a few months... Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 07:25, 22 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

@Ippantekina: thanks . I will be busy with another enwiki project + real life school nonsense this week, but I'll do my best to clear the backlog by reviewing one of your own ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
_{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 07:39, 23 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

On first glance the article is meticulously written and formatted. Sources are properly cited and everything looks sooo neat.

Many thanks

Lead and infobox

• In light of the issue with false titles (which I myself recently know), I suggest changing to "the American singer SZA"
  • This is a personal essay, and per WP:NOTBROKEN I feel fine with keeping it. This is a matter of style variation widely accepted across Wikipedia.
• "the lyrics discuss a fantasy to kill an ex-boyfriend and his new girlfriend out of jealousy, and it employs humorous" → "they employ"
  • Done
• "On its component Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart" is the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart really a component of the Hot 100?
  • no. that would be Digital Songs, Streaming Songs, and Radio Songs. Don't know why I added that word there. culled
• "and received many multi-platinum certifications worldwide." and it received?
  • Done
• "including but not limited to" pretty self-explanatory
  • that's gone
• Suggest adding ((short description)) manually as, per the GAN page, this article does not have one
  • Added
• Not sure if a release date for the remix is worth including in the Infobox
  • Open Arms (SZA song) passed with the same thing happening, so it's alright I would say. The remix's release is pretty notable too
• More to come. Ippantekina (talk) 03:20, 26 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
  • Seated! @Ippantekina all have been addressed ‍ ‍ Elias 🌊 ‍ ‍ ^{💬 "Will you call me?"}
    _{📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?"} 09:00, 26 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]