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Nominator: Vrxces (talk · contribs) 04:48, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 16:31, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
Will take this on in the coming days. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 16:31, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
@Pokelego999: Addressed the comments below. Please note I'm aware of some additional issues with WP:MOSQUOTE punctuation being inside quotation marks - this is a legacy of my old writing and I plan to fix this too. VRXCES (talk) 02:05, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
1. Article is well-written.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the game.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses two fair use images with proper rationale.
-Will note that you don't need to cite sources in the lead if they're cited in the article already. Less of a required fix and more just me nitpicking than anything.
-Should hack be hyperlinked? Not sure if that's standard or not but in this case it might be useful.
-Why is the farmer covered in blood even if they don't kill Julia? If it's not needed info then don't include it, but I am curious.
-"The player is able to ask three questions to the farmer" it seems like in-game, at least from what I'm reading, that the three questions are all required, while the wording here could imply it's a "choose one of the three options" kind of question. I'd reword this.
-Looks good.
-Looks good
-I feel the Boston Globe can likely be paraphrased instead of using quote snippets.
-PCGamer I feel can also likely be paraphrased.
-You can likely shorten the Rock, Paper, Shotgun quote a bit. I feel you can cut some of the initial bits to make it less lengthy.
-I feel the Screen Rant source is a bit unneeded here.
Really solid article on a very interesting subject. I had never heard of Moirai before reading this article, and it was very informative. Just fix what's above and I'll be happy to pass the article. Ping me if you have questions or need clarification. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 22:23, 25 April 2024 (UTC)