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Check for Provide an accessible overview (MOS:INTRO): Done
Major Point 1: Background "Arranged by Bebu Silvetti, it was one of the two original compositions written for Miguel's fifteenth studio album Romances." (not a concise summary of the corresponding section in the body)
Major Point 2: Promotion "The music video features Miguel performing at a fine-dining restaurant in New York City." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 3: Release and reception "It was released as the lead single from the album on July 15, 1997 and it became his thirteenth number-one single on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart in the United States." & "The track received a negative reaction from Achy Obejas of the Chicago Tribune who called it "lame". It was nominated Pop Song of the Year at the 10th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards and Manzanero was awarded a Broadcast Music, Inc. (BMI) Latin Award for writing the song. Manzanero performed the record as a duet with several artists such as Tania Libertad and Susana Zabaleta." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 4: Other recordings "" (not a concise summary of the corresponding section in the body)
Check for Relative emphasis: Done
Major Point 1: Background "Arranged by Bebu Silvetti, it was one of the two original compositions written for Miguel's fifteenth studio album Romances." (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 2: Promotion "The music video features Miguel performing at a fine-dining restaurant in New York City." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 3: Release and reception "It was released as the lead single from the album on July 15, 1997 and it became his thirteenth number-one single on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart in the United States." & "The track received a negative reaction from Achy Obejas of the Chicago Tribune who called it "lame". It was nominated Pop Song of the Year at the 10th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards and Manzanero was awarded a Broadcast Music, Inc. (BMI) Latin Award for writing the song. Manzanero performed the record as a duet with several artists such as Tania Libertad and Susana Zabaleta." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 4: Other recordings "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article:
I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. You've done great work, and I am quite happy to assist you in improving it. All the best, --Seabuckthorn♥ 10:22, 4 February 2014 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Hmm, well it's quite common for background sections for song articles to be copied from the parent album and not be mentioned in the lead for the most part. As for the "Other recordings" in the lead, I don't personally believe in mentioning in every artist who covered and just list examples. Erick (talk) 00:34, 5 February 2014 (UTC)Reply[reply]