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Reviewer: Bneu2013 (talk · contribs) 05:04, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I will be reviewing this article, and will have comments promptly. Bneu2013 (talk) 05:04, 24 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Infobox and lead

• Suggest linking "wheelchair lift. Although, with all the links in the first paragraph, that might infringe on MOS:SEAOFBLUE. You decide.
  •  Done

• I haven't skimmed through this history section yet, but has the station not had any significant rebuilds/changes since 1914 worth mentioning in the infobox?
  • Not particularly. I'm not sure if the removal of the second platform in the 1960s counts, given that it didn't come with any substantial changes to what remains.

• Change "declined midcentury" to something like "declined during the middle of the 20th century".
  •  Done

• Did Amtrak take over service as soon as it was founded in 1971? If so, I suggest elaborating in that sentence.
  • Amtrak was created in 1970, but did not take over service until May 1, 1971. The current wording should be fine.

• Change "with Rhinecliff served by 13 daily round trips by 2000" to something like "and by 2000, Rhinecliff was served by 13 daily round trips".
  •  Done

Station design

• The structure is cruciform in shape with Mission and Spanish Revival architectural styles. Or alternatively, you could say something like "and is constructed in the Mission and Spanish Revival architectural styles."
  •  Done
• Suggest bundling citations 7 and 8, since they are both used together in both uses, and the first use contains a total of four footnotes.
  •  Done

History