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Reviewer: Firefangledfeathers (talk · contribs) 17:28, 14 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I am picking up review of this second nomination. I was also the reviewer at Talk:Samia Suluhu Hassan/GA1, which was closed due to nominator inactivity. Thebiguglyalien is back at it, and I'm excited to see this head toward a likely pass. I have to start with a review of the changes made per GA1, and I'll have some feedback on that soon. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 17:28, 14 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

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Items from GA1

The changes made in response to the issues brought up in GA1 all look good. The only lingering item is the neutrality of §Style of governance. I brought up the first example, ""has been contrasted ...", and that has now been fixed, but I think more works is needed in the section. There are a few opinion statements, cited to opinion sources, stated sort of vaguely in wiki-voice. The next example would be "Suluhu is instead compared ...", which is cited to an opinion piece in the BBC. This should probably be attributed. I can enumerate all of the remaining issues, but you may want to get a jumpstart on your own re-work while I work through the other sections. If you'd prefer to wait, that's also fine. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 02:40, 15 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I've reworked it a little bit, hopefully it looks better now. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 02:52, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Thanks. Will have a look soon. Do you have a copy of "Tanzania: Samia Suluhu Hassan - a Tough Journey From Activism to Politics" you could email me? Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 02:57, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The archive link should be of a non-paywalled version. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 03:27, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

A definite improvement. Is "A sense of distrust has remained among the opposition, amplified by the persecution they experienced under her predecessor" the best way to summarize the AP source? Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 04:49, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]

I reworded the sentence to make it a little more nuanced in line with the source. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 20:59, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]