"What I think is the real failing of this piece is that it lacks scope. It just picks its way along from one little fact to another little fact, all of them ending up making Joseph Smith an ignoble character of some kind. And it never really assesses Joseph Smith's achievement. What was the significance of this person in history? After all, he was the founder of a church that is remarkable for continuing for a couple of centuries. Yet it doesn't give you any sense of how he did that. There's no explanation of how he acquired all these followers. … The article doesn't say anything about the impact of new revelation on followers or even make much of the fact that Joseph was continually receiving revelation. So it becomes a picky piece that isn't inaccurate, but it sort of lacks depth. It ends up being shallow, I think." (source) [1]
Joseph Smith, Jr. (December 23, 1805 – June 27, 1844) was an American religious leader and founder of Mormonism, the predominant religious tradition of the Latter Day Saint movement. At age twenty-four Smith published the Book of Mormon, and in the next fourteen years he gathered thousands of followers, built cities and temples, and created a religious culture that survived his death.
Smith was born in Sharon, Vermont. By 1817, Smith's family had moved to western New York, an area repeatedly swept by religious revivals during the Second Great Awakening. Smith family members held divergent views about organized religion, but they believed in visions and prophecies and engaged in folk religious practices typical of the era. According to Smith, beginning in the early 1820s he had visions, in one of which an angel directed him to a buried book of golden plates, inscribed with a Christian history of ancient American civilizations. In 1830, he published what he said was an English translation of these plates as the Book of Mormon, and organized the Church of Christ as a restoration of the early Christian church. Church members were later called Latter Day Saints, Saints, or Mormons.
In 1831, Smith and his followers moved west to Kirtland, Ohio and began establishing an outpost in Independence, Missouri, where Smith planned to build a city called Zion. In 1837 a bank established by Smith and other church leaders collapsed causing widespread defections. The following year Smith joined his followers in northern Missouri, who had been expelled from Independence by Missourians alarmed at the rapid growth of Mormon communities. The next year Conflicts erupted again between Mormons and the older Missouri settlers, and the Mormons were expelled from Missouri, while Smith was imprisoned for several months. In 1839, Smith rejoined his followers to settle at Nauvoo, Illinois where he served as both spiritual and political leader. In 1844, disaffected Mormons published an exposé criticizing Smith's theocratic aspirations and practice of polygamy. Three days later the Nauvoo City Council ordered the paper's destruction, precipitating a call to arms of non-Mormons outside Nauvoo who feared Smith's growing power. During the ensuing turmoil, Smith was imprisoned and killed in Carthage, Illinois.
During his lifetime Smith produced numerous revelations that are regarded as scripture by his followers. His teachings include unique views about the nature of God, cosmology, family structures, political organization, and religious collectivism. His followers regard him as a Biblical-style prophet of at least the stature of Moses and Elijah. Smith's legacy includes a number of religious denominations, including the Utah-based Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, which claims a growing membership of more than 14 million worldwide.
The article should focus on Smith's teachings, not the various interpretations of his teachings.
Statement in Article | Citation | Problem | Recommendation | Comments |
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Smith taught that during a Great Apostasy, the Bible had degenerated from its original inerrant form, and the "abominable church," led by Satan, had perverted true Christianity. | Hullinger | Unfortunately I don't have this book, but does it really say the Bible was inerrant and that the "abominable church" was lead specifically by Satan? I can't put my finger on the exact problem, but the sentence seems off to me, compared to what I've read. Also, this is partially covered in the Early Life section where it says Smith discovered that "all the current churches were false." | Delete redundant parts and move the rest to a paragraph on Smith's bible translation (I'm planning a new paragraph under Revelation). | |
He viewed himself as the latter-day prophet who restored those lost truths via the Book of Mormon and later revelations | Hullinger (describing how the Book of Mormon solved biblical controversies) | We've already got the bit about Smith viewing himself as a prophet elsewhere, and we now have an entire section on the Book of Mormon and later revelations. | Delete (already covered elsewhere) | |
He described the Book of Mormon as a literal "history of the origins of the Indians." | Bushman and Roberts | There's not a real problem with the sentence, though it is picking out one of many interpretations that Bushman is discussing. Also, Bushman didn't actually use the word "literal." Nevertheless, this information is more or less duplicated in the second paragraph on Book of Mormon. | Delete (already covered elsewhere) | |
The book called the Indians "Lamanites," a people descended from Israelites who had left Jerusalem in 600 BCE | Smith (1830), Phelps (1833) | This information is completely duplicated in the first paragraph of the new "Book of Mormon" section, where it is better sourced. | Delete (already covered elsewhere) | |
and whose skin pigmentation was a curse for their sinfulness. | Smith (1830) Quoted in Brodie. | Quotes one interpretation of the primary source material (that being the Book of Mormon) but ignores the other side of the coin presented in Bushman, that the Book of Mormon "champions the Indians' place in world history, assigning them a more glorious future than modern American whites." | Delete, or move to another section, expanding slightly and stating Bushman's interpretation along with Brodie's. I favor deletion, because it's a whole lot of detail that doesn't really say much about the man. (This kind of detail belongs in the Book of Mormon article.) | |
Though Smith first identified Mormons as gentiles, he began teaching in the 1830s that the Mormons, too, were literal Israelites. | Brooke and Shipps | Not sure what those sources say, but it certainly doesn't fit with what Bushman says. He says, "If the Gentiles shall hearken unto the Lamb of God...they shall be numbered among the House of Israel...God calls upon modern Christians to assist in the restoration—and to become Israelites themselves." (103-104) | It is an interesting doctrine, but if you correct the sentence, it really doesn't belong in a section on History. Delete | |
Smith also claimed to have regained lost truths of sacred history through his revelations and revision of the Bible | No citation | Did he actually say "lost truths of sacred history", or is this synth? | Move to a future paragraph under "Revelations" on the bible revision and source. | |
For example, he taught that the Garden of Eden had been located in Jackson County, Missouri, | No citation | Interesting factoid, but probably belongs somewhere else. | Delete or move (I recommend to a footnote in the Missouri subsection) | |
that Eve's partaking of the fruit was part of God's plan | 2 Nephi 2:22–25 | Primary source. Interesting, but more relevant under Cosmology | Delete (preferred) or source and move to Cosmology | |
that Adam had practiced baptism | No source, or sourced with next statement | Interesting, but again, tells us little about Smith | Delete (this is the reason we have articles on Mormonism, Mormon Cosmology, etc.) | |
that the descendants of Cain were "black," | Hill, Donna (1977), Joseph Smith: The first Mormon (citing Book of Moses 7:22). | Sounds like an interpretation of a primary source. Bushman only mentions Cain once (page 98), and this is not the context. | Delete | |
that Enoch had built a city of Zion so perfect that it was taken to heaven, | Bushman 138–41 The source does kind of say that, but that certainly wasn't the main point of those three pages, and Bushman doesn't say that Smith taught that specifically. | No major problems | Modify (to reflect cited source) and Move to somewhere talking about Smith's ideal of building a Zion society (probably Missouri section) | |
Smith declared that he would be one of the instruments in fulfilling Nebuchadnezzar's statue vision in the Book of Daniel: that he was the stone that would destroy secular government without "sword or gun", | Bushman 521 | Incorrect. If you read the page it is clear that the stone is the Kingdom of God. Smith only said he would be an instrument in setting up the Kingdom. | This information should be corrected and moved elsewhere. I think this particular concept of the the theodemocratic Kingdom of God being the stone (instead of, say, the United States) is important. Political views would be a good destination. | |
which would then be replaced with a theocratic Kingdom of God. | Brodie, Bushman, Bloom | No problems | Move with the above sentence. | |
Smith taught that this political kingdom would be multidenominational and "democratic" so long as the people chose wisely; but there would be no elections. | Bushman | No glaring problems | Move to Political Views section. | |
Jesus would appear during the Millennium as the ultimate ruler. Following a thousand years of peace, Judgment Day would be followed by a final resurrection, when all humanity would be assigned to one of three heavenly kingdoms. | Bushman 521, 536–37 | The first bit about the Millennium is hardly unique to Mormonism, though I see no problems with keeping it elsewhere (Cosmology perhaps). The last bit is inaccurate (for a technicality related to Outer darkness), and is already covered under Cosmology. | Correct and Move non-redundant parts to Cosmology. |
that Eve's partaking of the fruit was part of God's plan,[1]
Jesus would appear during the Millennium as the ultimate ruler. Following a thousand years of peace, Judgment Day would be followed by a final resurrection, when all humanity would be assigned to one of three heavenly kingdoms.[2]
Smith's idea that Mormons were Israelites should be mentioned prominently, because it is an important theme of his teachings. Also very significant is his belief that the Indians were Hebrews, and that he believed that a significant part of his mission was their "restoration." Also, you cannot underestimate the importance of his New Jerusalem teachings, or his teachings about Enoch, particularly Enoch's United Order. The racial elements ("Lamanites" and the descendants of Cain and Canaan) of his teachings are also very historically significant, and ought to be addressed somewhere as well, perhaps in the "political views" and "revelations" sections
In June 1830 Smith received a "revelation of Moses" telling of a series of visions in which Moses sees "the world and the ends thereof" and asks God questions about the purpose of the creation, the destiny of man, and his relationship to God.[3] This revelation initiated a revision of the Bible on which Smith worked sporadically until 1833.[4] Unlike traditional translations or revisions, Smith's "translation" added long passages and re-wrote sentences "according to his inspiration."[5] Smith believed that the original text had been corrupted in its descent through the ages, and proposed to strengthen biblical authority by restoring the original.[5] While many changes involved straighting out contradictions, and making small interpolations and clarifications, other changes added large "lost" portions.[6] For instance, Smith nearly tripled the length of the first five chapters of Genesis in writing what would become the Book of Moses.[7] Smith's bible translation was not published during his lifetime.[4]
The Book of Moses begins with Moses's "cosmic inquiry," in which Moses learns that God made the earth and heavens to bring humans to eternal life.[8] The book then gives another account of the creation story that Moses was believed to have described in Genesis. The Book of Moses expands the story of Enoch, the ancestor of Noah, saying he spoke with God, received a prophetic calling, and eventually built a city of Zion so righteous that it was taken to heaven.[9] The book elaborates and expands upon foreshadowing and "types" of Christ, in effect Christianizing the Old Testament.[10]
In 1835 Smith encouraged some of the Kirtland Saints to purchase rolls of ancient Egyptian papyri from a traveling exhibitor. Over the next several years Smith worked off and on as events allowed, producing a translation of one of these rolls which he published in 1842 as the Book of Abraham.[11] The Book of Abraham told of the founding of the Abrahamic nation, spoke of astronomy, cosmology, lineage and priesthood, and gave another account of the creation story.[12]
Smith attracted thousands of devoted followers before his death in 1844[13] and millions within a century.[14] During his lifetime, Smith's role in the Latter Day Saint religion was comparable to that of Muhammad in early Islam,[15] and his followers regarded him as a prophet and apostle of at least the stature of Moses, Elijah, Peter and Paul.[16]
It is unlikely, though, that there will ever be consensus on Smith's character and achievements.[17] Mormons and Ex-Mormons have produced a large amount of scholarly work about Smith, and while Mormons tend to shield their prophet's reputation, those who have broken away from the faith have to justify their decision to leave.[17] Interpretations range from viewing Smith as a prophet who restored the true faith,[18] to a "pious fraud" who believed he was called of God to preach repentance, and felt justified inventing visions in order to convert people,[19] to a "mythmaker" who was the product of his Yankee environment.[20] Most agree though that Smith was one of the most influential, charismatic, and innovative figures in American religious history.[21]
Smith's teachings and practices aroused considerable antagonism, with newspapers as early as 1829 dismissing him as a fraud[22] (a view still held by many evangelical Christians).[23] He was twice imprisoned for alleged treason,[24] the second time falling victim to an angry mob that stormed the jail.[25] After his death at age thirty eight, the Saints believed he had died as a martyr to seal the testimony of his faith.[26] Smith himself made no claims to perfection, comparing himself to a "rough stone", speaking of his impetuosity and lack of polish.[17]
Of all Smith's visions, Saints gradually came to regard his First Vision as the most important[27] because it inaugurated his prophetic calling and character.[28] Memorials to Smith include the Joseph Smith Memorial Building in Salt Lake City, Utah, and the Joseph Smith Building on the campus of Brigham Young University.
Current section is wordy, unclear, messy, and spends an inordinate amount of time on something that biographers practically ignore.
Much of what we know about Smith comes from court records. Give a quick overview of the many trials he had, the charges, and outcomes.
How should the subject of the First Vision be treated in the Early Life section? Below are four different versions that have been discussed.
During the 1830s Smith wrote that as a youth he had become concerned for the welfare of his soul and was confused by competing religious denominations. Probably around 1820 Smith went to a wooded area to pray and later said that in response to his prayer he had a vision in which God appeared, told him his sins were forgiven, and that all contemporary churches had "turned aside from the gospel." Smith said he told a preacher about the experience, who he said dismissed the vision with contempt, further distancing Smith from organized religion. Though his "First Vision" would be seen by later generations as Mormonism's founding event, Smith probably understood it as a personal conversion, and the story was unknown to most early believers.
During the 1830s Smith wrote that as a youth he had become concerned with religion and that around 1820 he had a vision in which God told him his sins were forgiven, and that contemporary churches had "turned aside from the gospel." Smith said he told a preacher about the experience, who he said dismissed the vision with contempt, distancing Smith from organized religion. Though his "First Vision" would be seen by later generations as Mormonism's founding event, Smith probably understood it as a personal conversion, and the story was unknown to most early believers.
According to witnesses, Smith began using a single seer stone (not part of a set of spectacles) during a second phase of translation,[43] the same brown stone he had earlier used in treasure seeking.[44][45] Smith placed the stone in a hat, buried his face in it to eliminate all outside light, and peered into the stone to see the words of the translation.[46]
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