1. Check search rankings. Make sure the examples are ordered in such a way that matches their over all market share.
2. Once draft complete run article through Grammarly to make sure there's no accidental similarities to other published work.
3. Wonky wording. Research on better ways to discuss empowerment so it's more clear.
4. Get better link to methodology for USA DOJO, research and see if they'd meet inclusion criteria for their own article. It'd be nice to actually link articles vs various webpages. Check into specific examples of law enforcement agencies that use padded assailant / full force training.
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