- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Numbers below ten should be written in text.
- Within a context or a list, style should be consistent (either 5 cats and 32 dogs or five cats and thirty-two dogs, not five cats and 32 dogs). WP:DATE#Numbers
- "the band have released 16 studio albums, plus 4 albums issued in Australia" - yuck - the "plus" is confusing, and also, the infobox says 17 studio albums...
- The band have released 16 studio albums. There's one studio album confirmed to be released later this year. Fixed the "plus" thing.
- You should link AC/DC in the lead (obviously not in the bold lead in but as soon as possible afterwards).
- Fixed.
- "released over the years" - too familiar for me - write encyclopaedically.
- Fixed.
- "are about as close as" ditto. Plus this is a little WP:OR for my taste.
- That statement is referenced.
- Fixed.
- Image caption is a fragment and thus doesn't require a full stop.
- Fixed.
- Shouldn't the album titles in the table be bold as well as italic?
- Fixed.
- " weren't re-released " - were not. Avoid contractions.
- Fixed.
- Be consistent with WP:DATE linking.
- Fixed.
- Fixed. No-Bullet (Talk • Contribs) 13:52, 26 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That's enough from me.
The Rambling Man (
talk) 10:11, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
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