I am nominating this list with User:K. Annoyomous24 because we believe it should be promoted to a featured list.—Chris!ct 00:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
"[1], to " move comma to before ref.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"to the best player " no - to the player voted to have been the best?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"award given since the 1953 All-Star Game[1], to the best player of the annual All-Star Game. The award was established in 1953 when NBA officials decided to designate an MVP for each year's game. " these two sentences effectively say the same thing.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The league also re-honor players from the previous two All-Star Games." every year? or just the once?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"who cast vote after " their vote? their votes? do they get more than one each? a first/second/third?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Image captions look like complete sentences so need a full stop.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"NAME (X)" just "Player (X)" or "Name (X)" is fine. No need for all the SHOUTING.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Los Angeles Lakers (6)" - did you intend to add the number awarded to each team?
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Image:George Mikan 99.jpg has no fair use rationale for use in this page. And I doubt you can provide a satisfactory one.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Eleven voters, how can you get joint winners? Needs explanation.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The most recent winner..." - The 2008 winner.
DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]