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I have just finished significantly expanding this stub article and I hope it to obtain C-Class. Definitely I need help with English syntax I wrote. I have also created 2 battle maps for this article that I would love te be reviewed. Another problem I'm wondering about is which language I should take the name of the town from(English, Polish - who owned thes places at the time of the battle, Ukrainian - current place location). This is my first significant contribution, I appreciate any help a lot.
Thanks, Kontekstowy (talk) 19:03, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
Battle of Podhajce took place on 8–9 Septemberadd "The" before "Battle"
Ottoman Empire was defeated during Azov campaigns (1695–1696) and in 1697 in the Battle of Zenta.add "The" before "Ottoman Empire" and "the" before "Azov campaigns"
focus on succession of Habsburg Spain during impending death of Charles II of Spainadd "the" before "succession" and before "impending"
began negotiations with Ottoman Empire proposing end of war with each member of Holy League keepingadd "the" before "Ottoman Empire", before "end", and before "Holy League"
In January 1698, Stambul's intelligence,
In the afternoon, the first group led by Qaplan, and
During the night war council Potocki decided to give battle to the Tatars outside the city. According to WP:V,
All content must be verifiableand inline citations are required for
all material that is likely to be challenged. It's usually a good practice to ensure that each paragraph has at least one inline citation. They are not required for the lead section if it only summarizes material in the body of the article that has already citations. Currently, the article is based on a single source (Wojtasik 1990), which is probably not a good idea. I would suggest that you look up more sources to have some variety.
its numbers was between 30,000 and 50,000.replace "was" with "were"
Polish and Saxons troops locatedreplace "Saxons" with "Saxon"