This article is about strange, footnote-of-history type character. A British prince who became a German duke and later a Nazi leader. It is currently a good article which has recently been unofficially reviewed by Gerda Arendt and Surtsicna. I am hopping to get it ready for an FAC.
Thanks, Llewee (talk) 22:47, 20 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Hi, I will take this one up and post my comments by end of day today. Matarisvan (talk) 04:45, 4 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Matarisvan
Apologies for the delayed response, Llewee. On a first glance at the lead & sources, here are my comments:
- Why not link to the French/Italian wiki page for Princess Caroline Mathilde in the infobox?
- The Italian article is largely cited to one of those pop culture wikis so I've used the French one.--Llewee (talk) 20:11, 8 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Please add translated titles for the sources in the references & further reading section.
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- No. 24, #31 and #40 haven't been translated. Must have glossed over, happens to me too. Also, could you reverse the vandalising edits made recently - the user seems genuine, their account must have been hacked. Matarisvan (talk) 11:33, 9 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Those edits were related to a discussion which has been taking place about whether a line should be included in the intro. I think the editor in question may have got frustrated and made some changes that were ill-judged. In any case, the edits have been reverted and I think the matter is now settled. The untranslated sources have now either been expanded or merged into translated ones.--Llewee (talk) 22:24, 9 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- #31 and #10 seem to be the same source, can we club them? #5, #34 & #35 seem to have the same problem.
- I think this issue has been sorted now.
- The alt text on the images is great, but I believe you have not added alt text to a few images in the early parts of the article.
- I have added Alt text to the images that lacked it.--Llewee (talk) 22:52, 9 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
I will post my comments soon but one thing I did notice, @Llewee, is that the punctuation is lacking, mainly the commas are missing which makes the text too long winding. Cheers. Matarisvan (talk) 12:56, 12 February 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]