- Previous peer review can be found here
New peer review to take this article from a great state to a featured article status, as part of the article improvement drive for the Football Wikiproject. The Rambling Man 15:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Its more or less ready for an FAC run. Occasional things from the previous peer review aren't completely ironed out, its worth going over the points that were raised there.
A few minor additional things:
- Calling the Liverpool Academy "highly commended" needs to be qualified in some way.
- The paragraph which starts "In 1922 and 1923 Liverpool won their first back-to-back League titles" reads uneasily. The events mentioned could be linked up more smoothly, they seem shoehorned together.
- The number of deaths at Hillsborough needs referencing, should be easy to find something to cite.
Oldelpaso 19:42, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Well, I've re-written that para to some extent, it may be able to be improved further, though. ArtVandelay13 20:07, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]