This is the biography of the leading Chad rebel commander. I want to ask a review of this article so to see how far it is from a potential A-class category, and what is most necessary to be done. The great lack, as all may notice, is the lack of images; there's little I can do, unfortunately, as free images of prominent Chadians are in general extremely rare (there's only one in wikipedia, and it's that of the current President of the country).--Aldux (talk) 18:46, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Kirill Lokshin
Quite nice, overall. A few minor suggestions:
- There's a lot of redlinks in the article; any chance of getting some of the more prominent ones stubbed out?
- Are there images available of any of the events, particularly in the civil war? Maps could potentially work here, if nothing else can be found.
- Should there be succession boxes for his political posts, or are they all single-holder things?
Keep up the good work! Kirill 12:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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- Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Single years without accompanying dates, decades, and centuries should only be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
- This article has no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
- Please consider adding
((persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!)) along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?]
- Per Wikipedia:Autoformatting of dates, years with full dates should be linked; for example, if January 15, 2006 appeared in the article, link it as January 15, 2006.[?]
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article—please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
- was considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations.[?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 13:36, 3 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]