11:2411:24, 5 May 2013diffhist+14
Sofology
→Criticism: NPOV, let's say who David Naylor is (since he isn't actually prominent enough to warrant an article) and let's not judge things to be "unfortunate" or not.
11:2011:20, 5 May 2013diffhist−77
Sofology
→Other facts: remove one uncited item, which seems to have been lumped in with another cited item. Split the criticism out and attempt to remove the emotive wording