16:0916:09, 13 August 2010diffhist+727
Oom Yung Doe
With new legal proceedings against Kim, I have split the critical section into "legal Proceedings" and an "other criticism" section. I used the article on Kevin Trudeau as a sort of template.
15:2915:29, 13 August 2010diffhist−65
Oom Yung Doe
The statement's authoritative tone does not reflect facts; purported health benefits are outlined in the respective section.
17:2217:22, 17 October 2009diffhist+482
Oom Yung Doe
I moved up the positive statements about OYD to the top of the article. Altered the description to directly reflect statements. Added a few words in about Kim's conviction and incarceration.
17:5717:57, 24 July 2009diffhist+5
Oom Yung Doe
OYD is still a contreversial organization. Citation included. Critics describe OYD as a "cult" not as an organization that requires "excessive loyalty".