21:3421:34, 4 December 2020diffhist−328
Hormonal contraception
Removed a stat about worldwide use of hormonal contraception that was not found in the referenced citation source. The source merely says 18% of US women use oral contraception pills, which is a) a subset of the world and b) a subset of hormonal contraceptives (e.g. patch, ring...). Sorry if deleting isn't the right way to fix this, I couldn't find any to only mark it as unreferenced.Tag: Visual edit
02:5102:51, 3 August 2018diffhist+9 m
Indian Rebellion of 1857
→Death toll and atrocities: Once again passive phrasing makes this an imprecise description of the events. "Places" do not "meet with general massacare" but rather specific people get massacared by other specific people. I realize this is a common style in English, but it serves to muddle -- rather than elucidate -- the article.Tag: Visual edit
02:4702:47, 3 August 2018diffhist−9 m
Indian Rebellion of 1857
→Aftermath: The phrasing implied that both sides equally committed the "huge number" of atrocities, which obfuscates the fact that most of the recorded atrocities were committed by the British (as described in the next section regarding reaction in Britain). Similarly the 150,000 Indians were killed by the British, but the previous phrasing simply stated they had "died."Tag: Visual edit
18:2018:20, 8 August 2015diffhist+95
Water cycle
Added an improved diagram of the Water Cycle, in place of the somewhat confusing and unappealing current ones. Tried to incorporate as much as possible from the other diagrams and the content of the article. I'm happy to hear suggestions for improvement!