03:2903:29, 9 June 2019diffhist+185
Back-up beeper
→Criticism: Replaced and removed citation to a Youtube video to defend claim about localization of different sounds. Not an appropriate source for such a claim. Added a citation to academic research that demonstrates the lower rates of localization confusion for broadband signals over tonal ones.
02:2902:29, 18 April 2018diffhist−2,153
TransPod
Reverted edits on Janzen bio. Claimed contributions to scientific fields are promotional and not represented in independent literature.
04:1204:12, 25 February 2018diffhist−2,900
TransPod
Removed advertising tone and irrelevancies. Still needs more sources not directly from the CTO or company webpages.
22:5522:55, 22 February 2018diffhist−1,730
TransPod
→Governance: Whole section read like a CV with inflated language, unremarkable details, and unverified claims of impact. Rewrote with plain language, removed unverified claims, and removed sources owned and/or authored by subject.Tag: references removed
06:4806:48, 3 January 2018diffhist−1 m
Fenestron
Article choice (a/an) depends on the sound of the beginning of the preceded word, not strictly its first letter. "Eurocopter" begins with a "y" sound thus the article should be "a".