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A fact from Killing of David Ben Avraham appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 June 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Would it be better to use "when" rather than "while"? According to Wikipedia, "while" is also a word to watch:
Words to watch: but, despite, however, though, although, furthermore, while ...
I actually think in this case, the sources support that it was later found there was no evidence that he posed a threat, but if the goal is to make the hook neutral, maybe we should avoid these "words to watch" in the hook. Wafflefrites (talk) 22:04, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Starship.paint: Thanks for the comment. Being controversial or not is subjective, the original hook is fully sourced to multiple reliable sources, including the Israeli military which certainly does not have a conflict of interest in this case. I stand by the original hook.
As for the picture, it is certainly not copyrighted per WP: For example, "[i]f a security camera mounted in a lobby, recording 24 hours a day, captured a dramatic event, the video could be uncopyrighted." Also as evidenced by this example: [1]. Makeandtoss (talk) 10:16, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Makeandtoss: - that is not pre-positioned recording devices, not security camera mounted in a lobby, not information produced by an automated system, such as a CCTV or traffic enforcement camera. It's either a body camera video or even a handphone video. [2]starship.paint (RUN)14:44, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Starship.paint: If it is a body cam then it is a "pre-positioned recording devices" and thus uncopyrighted. It is impossible to hold an M4 in a threatening way while holding a phone in the other hand. It is definitely a body cam video. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:52, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Now that I think about it, running the article at all on DYK would probably not be a good idea. ALT0 would raise concerns about NPOV, but even if those were allayed, it might be a bad look to run a hook about a Palestinian being killed by an Israeli on the main page, even if it was factually true. The content of the article itself may also give pause, especially now when the Gaza conflict is dominating headlines. This might be a case where, even if the article would technically be eligible, it may not be a good fit for DYK given the circumstances. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:49, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for expressing your opinion. But again why would there be problems of NPOV when Israel itself has admitted to this POV? If there is no opposing POV, then there is no NPOV issue. The article is well-written and is eligible for DYK. Why do you think it is a "bad look" to run a hook about a Palestinian being killed by an Israeli on the main page, when a DYK about a Ukrainian being killed by a Russian was posted at the height of Russia's invasion of Ukraine in April 2022?: "... that Ukrainian actress Oksana Shvets, who was killed in the 2022 invasion of Ukraine, starred in the 2013 joint Ukrainian–Russian television family saga House with Lilies alongside Russian actors?" Makeandtoss (talk) 13:32, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Had I known about that hook I would have opposed it as well. But for what it's worth, the Israel-Palestine conflict is a much more heated, longer lasting conflict. A hook that basically says "Israel did something bad to a Palestinian" being put on the main page would be a very very bad look for DYK, especially with the ongoing conflict. At the very least it might result in complaints either at WT:DYK or at WP:ERRORS, and at worst it could lead to criticism of the project as a whole. There are some topics that, usually for reasons beyond the control of Wikipedia or editors, are probably not a good fit for DYK and this is probably one of them. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:37, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think it's appropriate for WP to display a double standard given whatever excuse. The article is well-written and is eligible for DYK. Anything other than that is subjective. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:41, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This article reminds me of Murder of George Floyd and that article was featured in Wikipedia’s In the news. Most of the sources that reported on this are actually Jewish sources. I added a detail that he was shot in the lower body (which was reverted). There are some details missing from this English Wiki article. The Hebrew Wikipedia article actually has more details. According to the Hebrew article, he was shot in the lower body, and afterward a tourniquet was applied and they called an ambulance.Wafflefrites (talk) 13:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. @ Narutolovehinata5 This is a perennial topic which I always respond to with the same comment which is we follow policy. We follow Wikipedia:Did you know/Guidelines and we follow WP:NPOV and WP:Verifiability. As with the rest of wikipedia, DYK is WP:NOTCENSORED. We feature controversial topics like this all the time on the main page in Wikipedia:In the news. Likewise, we have run hooks on even more controversial topics than this one in the past at DYK. Controversy is not a valid reason to reject a hook as long as the article is neutrally written and cited to reliable RS.4meter4 (talk) 06:39, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The assertion regarding a strict following of WP:NOTCENSORED is incorrect, Content that will appear on the main page is often 'censored' in that it undergoes additional considerations to those that would apply to article space, including WP:ITN. CMD (talk) 06:59, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would say that we curate not censor the main page. We curate the main page because there is a limited amount of content that can be featured at any one time. And while we may avoid inflammatory language purposefully at DYK and ITN as part of that curation, I personally have never seen a successful case of outright censorship being enacted against a given topic. Typically we work to find a way to feature eligible articles with sensitive content by modifying the language of how we present those topics on the main page. That said, there may be cases of censorship in the past that I personally am not aware of. If they have happened, they shouldn't have as a matter of policy.4meter4 (talk) 21:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Marco Pierre White Jr was rejected, although looking at it now it's hard to argue that as being particularly main page worthy. (I could very much do with you if I ever decide to GA it and try it on again here.)--Launchballer21:18, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Launchballer, I don't think that's a good example of censorship. In the case of Marco Pierre White Jr I think there is a strong argument to be made based on WP:BLP policy that the hook was not appropriate for the main page. BLP policy is a whole other ball of wax.4meter4 (talk) 21:27, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I would be strongly opposed to any hook that even touches the "Palestinian getting killed by an Israeli" angle, and I suspect that any attempts to push such an angle would at the latest result in being yanked from a prep/queue, or a trip to either WT:DYK or WP:ERRORS. For the record, had the incident been about an Israeli being killed by a Palestinian I would have said the same thing. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:21, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Again, WP should not display double standards; if it is okay to feature a hook saying a Ukrainian was killed by Russia, then it should be perfectly fine for a hook to say a Palestinian has been killed by Israel. This pro-western bias is not appropriate and goes against Wikipedia's policies. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:24, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It can also be a case of correcting a mistake. In my opinion, that Ukrainian hook should not have run in the first place, at least not with that hook.
I don't see a problem with running a hook on calls for Israel's destruction if the article was normally written without any neutrality tags, heck I would have even reviewed and approved it myself. Why would I let my personal opinions or preferences obstruct Wikipedia processes? It's not a mistake to report on facts; how people feel/interpret/respond to these facts is up to them. I think this is really self-evident that that the Ukraine hook was not a mistake, and neither will this be. Makeandtoss (talk) 15:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe we can try to rewrite the hook to help with the DYK nomination? Some articles say “mistakenly killed”:
Comment How about a hook that de-emphasizes the broader conflict and avoids Palestine V.S. Israel language:
Alt2 ... that after his death David Ben Avraham was granted Israeli residency as a form of justice by Israeli Minister of Interior Moshe Arbel?
This avoids saying how he died, who was responsible for killing him, whether it was a murder or accident, etc. Given his Hebrew sounding name, it's also not clear he's a Palestinian in the hook. It also leaves the reader wondering how Israeli residency could be considered a form of justice (which is a direct quote from Arbel). All of this to say, it's accurate, neutral, and non-inflammatory. It shouldn't raise anyone's hackles and is still interesting.4meter4 (talk) 16:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The article is about his killing, its circumstances and the context; it’s not a biography; so no, de-emphasizing the killing into some heroic recognition by the state that had killed him is quite honestly extremely inappropriate.Makeandtoss (talk) 19:30, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. Since you aren't willing to tone things down Makeandtoss, it's not happening. DYK is not a summary of an article, and this hook statement is true. It's clear you have an editorial WP:POVPUSH and DYK isn't going to be your WP:SOAPBOX as a matter of principal. You can either accept a non-inflammatory hook to drive traffic and readers to the article you have written or not be featured at DYK Rejecting per Per rule C11 of the suplementary guideline, as the nominator is not willing to craft a hook that isn't sensational and insists on emphasizing violence and Palestinian/Israeli animus. 4meter4 (talk) 19:33, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Update After discussions on the WP DYK talk page, there seems to be more support for ALT3: "...that David Ben Avraham was posthumously granted an Israeli residency after having been killed?", which comes as a compromise solution between opposing views. Also, 4meter4 has expressed his openness for a new reviewer taking over the process. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:48, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think ALT3 is good. The article has been updated and is more comprehensive. Feedback was given on the talk page and article improvements made based on talk page feedback. Wafflefrites (talk) 14:19, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I can tell you that ALT3 is short enough, cited, and interesting; "being" is more concise than "having been", but I'll let a promoter make that edit. Let's roll.--Launchballer15:38, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: can you explain under which policy you're saying "I would be strongly opposed to any hook that even touches the "Palestinian getting killed by an Israeli" angle". I can understand being opposed to something on grounds of it being not verified, or it violating NPOV. But we don't simply WP:CENSOR certain viewpoints (when presented in a verifiable and neutral way). VR(Please ping on reply)11:46, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There have been concerns in the past about topics that are pushing a particular point of view, or giving that impression, getting backlash. I remember of cases in the past where an article was nominated for DYK but was not allowed to run due to it being seen in bad taste. This happened not too long ago with Russia, which was nominated for DYK. It was ultimately not approved due to having a pending GAR, which ultimately failed anyway and it remained a GA, but even before then there was opposition running Russia on the main page at all due to the war. Having said that, while I am still uncomfortable with the article running, I appear to be in the minority here and will ultimately follow whatever consensus is reached. Having said that, if this is to run and isn't brought to WT:DYK or ERRORS beforehand, I would oppose any suggestion other than ALT3. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:04, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh go on then. Long enough, new enough. Already ticked ALT3 above. No maintenance templates found, no copyright concerns, neutrality's dealt with. I absolutely hate the WP:CLUMP of six references for the "grave incident" quote, but that isn't required for DYK. Let's roll.--Launchballer15:44, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is on Approved, so it should be promoted soon. (I still hate that WP:CLUMP, but again, not a DYK issue. It should be.) Perhaps if a promoter skips this, they could point out exactly why not.--Launchballer09:32, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Crossed off the other alts above for clarity, and restating ALT3 here:: "...that David Ben Avraham was posthumously granted an Israeli residency after having been killed?" CMD (talk) 01:30, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
NPOV says "representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic." I have not seen a single news article on this event that doesn't start off by mentioning that Ben Avraham was killed by an IDF soldier. Without that context, the hook doesn't even make sense; is Israel's new immigration policy handing out permanent residencies to random victims of homicide? None of the opposition to these hooks seems to be based on policy, but a desire from the regular editors here to just avoid anything they see as controversial. WT:DYK and ERRORS in relation to any vaguely political topic devolves to the same 10 editors arguing about the same thing until the hook eventually never runs because it's "controversial". AryKun (talk) 06:13, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'd suggest ALT4:... that Palestinian Jewish convert David Ben Avraham (pictured) was posthumously granted Israeli residency after being killed by an Israeli soldier?
It mentions the facts that make the story notable in the first place and is similar to ALT1 and ALT2, but with less editorializing. I would be fine with promoting it if the others are okay with the hook. AryKun (talk) 12:05, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure "its" works there, as it refers to residency. What about replacing "Israeli soldier" with "IDF soldier"? CMD (talk) 02:18, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Just wanted to drop a note here to ask for others to check the accuracy and neutrality of the article. It is nominated for DYK and will need to be neutral and without dispute tags to run. Some editors who may have expertise in this area. @Nableezy, Starship.paint, Iskandar323, Alalch E., and Marokwitz:. Thank you in advance. Bruxton (talk) 16:43, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the ping. The introductory sentence should not be separated into its own paragraph: MOS:OPEN recommends starting the article with a paragraph, MOS:LEAD (introduction) suggests that the paragraphs should be "well-composed" (and a single-sentence paragraph is not a well-composed paragraph), and MOS:PARA recommends minimizing the number of single-sentence paragraphs. The second paragraph of the lead breaks up the narrative of what happened in the event and creates too strong of a suggestion that he was killed in connection with his ethnic and religious background which is not supported by explicit statements in the body. So that entire paragraph should be removed from the lead. And the "Background" section should be renamed to "David Ben Avraham", as, while it is not irrelevant who was killed, describing his ethnic and religious background as elements in the causal chain leading to his killing, which the term "background" implies or can imply, again needs to be supported by statements about such a link. So I would deal with this, but it is not necessary to describe it as a neutrality problem. —Alalch E.16:58, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the feedback, which I dealt with. Note that the lede is a summary of the body, and the body is a reflection of what RS have reported; all of the sources cited in the article have reported on his conversion process and ethnic and religious background, so this is definitely notable to mention. Makeandtoss (talk) 20:08, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Yes, basically... on a second thought, and seeing how you have handled it, moving lead paragraph lower was certainly the solution. It's too much of a copy of the corresponding content in the body however. Doesn't summarize effectively. —Alalch E.21:32, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think this is the most "summarizable" version possible; one that does not miss out on important details. You're more than welcome to expand on the body, but I guess this wouldn't relate to neutrality. Makeandtoss (talk) 21:38, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Under the "Killing" section, it says that Ben Avraham got off a taxi. I checked the English source, and it does not say "taxi". I am not sure about the non-English sources.
@Bruxton: I can't say I have expertise in this area, I am very much learning. But I will do what I can given the time I have, when I am free, which I am not very. I've done some editing around quotes. starship.paint (RUN)13:18, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also pinging @Eladkarmel: if he is able to help. Do you know anything about this recent current news event? There is a Hebrew Wikipedia article on this, and it has additional details that are not in the English sources. Wafflefrites (talk) 16:02, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
According to the Hebrew Wikipedia article, he was shot in the lower body, and afterward a tourniquet was applied and they called an ambulance.
Most RS have not reported on these details, especially the "tourniquet" part, so this is definitely an extraordinary claim that would require substantial sourcing. Makeandtoss (talk) 19:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I was not able to verify tourniquet or ambulance using a quick Google translate on the Hebrew Wiki article source, I might have to check again later. Wafflefrites (talk) 19:57, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Times of Israel is a well-known and centrist, although often biased source. Israel national news, without opening it, sounds probably like a mouthpiece of the Israeli government just from the name of it. If the lower body/tourniquet parts were true, they would have been reported first and foremost by the Time of Israel; which is obviously not the case, making this likely extraordinary claim. Makeandtoss (talk) 20:18, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Is the context in the article sufficient for NPOV? In current version (2nd to last para), it gives context of 350 Palestinians killed by Israelis. Should there be some context about Palestinian violence against Israelis (Israeli Jews), which accounts partly for the level of military and police readiness to use force? ProfGray (talk) 17:23, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, that makes sense. Those points and related events are in the sources, but not yet in the Wiki article. It probably belongs in the Background section. Wafflefrites (talk) 18:58, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
“ Security forces in Jerusalem and the West Bank are on high alert due to the Ramadan Muslim holy month, amid fears that tensions could ramp up as the war against the Hamas terror group continues in Gaza.
On Tuesday a gunman opened fire on two Shin Bet security service officers between the settlement of Migdal Oz and the Gush Etzion Junction, some two kilometers (1.2 miles) from the Elazar bus stop.
The pair returned fire at the gunman, “neutralizing” him, the Shin Bet and Israel Defense Forces said. One of the officers was seriously injured, and both were taken to a hospital in Jerusalem for treatment.
Palestinians say over 400 people have been killed by Israeli forces in the West Bank since hostilities broke out with the Hamas terror group in Gaza on October 7, most while carrying out attacks or during clashes with IDF troops.”
“ The development came after two members of Israel’s security forces were wounded on Tuesday in a shooting attack near the Oz veGaon Nature Reserve, located between the Gush Etzion Junction and Migdal Oz in Judea.
The victims, both of them officers of the Israel Security Agency (Shin Bet), were lightly and seriously wounded, respectively.
One of the officers returned fire, killing the assailant. The terrorist was identified as Ziad al-Hamran, 30, from Jenin in northern Samaria.
Meanwhile, the IDF said on Thursday that Israeli forces operated in the Nur Shams camp, near Tulkarem in western Samaria, hours after launching a brigade-level counterterror operation in the area.
The military confirmed that during the operation, an airstrike had been carried out against two terrorists who posed an “immediate threat” to troops.
IDF soldiers killed two additional terrorists during a gun battle and detained three wanted Palestinians.
On Wednesday, an Israeli Air Force drone strike killed two senior Palestinian Islamic Jihad terrorists in the northern Samaria city of Jenin, according to the military and the Israel Security Agency (Shin Bet).
The slain terrorists were identified as Ahmed Barakat and Muhammad Hawashin.
According to a joint statement by the IDF and Shin Bet, Barakat carried out a terrorist shooting in Samaria on May 30, 2023, murdering Israeli civilian Meir Tamari, 31.
Barakat and Hawashin recently plotted a thwarted attack that targeted “the heart of Israel,” and were also behind the March 8 terrorist bombing that wounded seven Israeli soldiers at a military outpost near Homesh, outside Nablus in central Samaria, according to the statement.” Wafflefrites (talk) 00:11, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]