12 September 2013

• 01:1501:15, 12 September 2013 diff hist −65‎ Dead Man Down ‎ inline reference for Metacritic. No need to repeat Metacritic and Rotten Tomatoes in the external links.
• 01:1201:12, 12 September 2013 diff hist +309‎ Dead Man Down ‎ WP:RTMC Mixed or negative pick one. if Metacritic says generally unfavorable then ... how many reviews? Where's the inline citation?
• 01:0201:02, 12 September 2013 diff hist +936‎ User talk:Jackson Peebles ‎ →‎Gross: new section
• 00:5200:52, 12 September 2013 diff hist +633‎ Wikipedia:Third opinion ‎ Which slightly dodgy numbers do we go with? I just want consistency.
• 00:4900:49, 12 September 2013 diff hist +150‎ Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ add small explanation why I accepted the dodgy figures.
• 00:4200:42, 12 September 2013 diff hist +746‎ Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ box office mess.
• 00:3600:36, 12 September 2013 diff hist +6‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Please see Talk Page. Discuss. Change both, but do not make the article inconsistent. Undid revision 572550968
• 00:3100:31, 12 September 2013 diff hist +194‎ Byzantium (film) ‎ Gross only available for US both sources are same. Avoid run on sentence. Keep it simple. Remove unnecessary space before reference. Individual critics would be good.
• 00:2200:22, 12 September 2013 diff hist +17‎ Shimmy Marcus ‎ fixes.
• 00:1500:15, 12 September 2013 diff hist +585‎ Mark Mothersbaugh ‎ Format Reflist as 2 columns and list of soundtracks too. deadlinks. Also WP:EL most of those should be in the aricle as references not in External links.

11 September 2013

• 23:4923:49, 11 September 2013 diff hist +28‎ Dublin Fringe Festival ‎ No references.
• 23:4123:41, 11 September 2013 diff hist +507‎ Dublin Fringe Festival ‎ Goan going gone.
• 23:0323:03, 11 September 2013 diff hist +6‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Revert but only because infobox and article do not match, I'd have left it if you'd used The Numbers in both places. See Talk page "Box office mojo sucks" Undid revision 572538052 by 200.30.220.241
• 23:0123:01, 11 September 2013 diff hist +635‎ Sliding Doors ‎ Worldwide gross should be used in infobox. Add a few more critics. Whole "see also" section is dubious.
• 21:4921:49, 11 September 2013 diff hist +249‎ Harry and the Hendersons ‎ minutes not min. gross is normally worldwide. need only be specified if not the worldwide gross and the domestic gross. tidy up reception section but it needs to be expanded (too many reviews referenced but not discussed)
• 21:4921:49, 11 September 2013 diff hist +42‎ He Loves Me... He Loves Me Not (film) ‎ minutes not min. Box Office can be made a subsection of Reception (indicates the audience response)
• 21:3321:33, 11 September 2013 diff hist +12‎ Sidewalks of New York (2001 film) ‎ fix box office mojo ref
• 21:3021:30, 11 September 2013 diff hist +105‎ Sidewalks of New York (2001 film) ‎ Citation needed. Indian film fans keeping adding stuff like this but it is almost impossible to WP:VERIFY and does not belong in the intro.
• 21:2821:28, 11 September 2013 diff hist −23‎ Fartman (Howard Stern) ‎ copyedit
• 21:2521:25, 11 September 2013 diff hist +5‎ Sidewalks of New York (2001 film) ‎ Tidy article. Remove claim of success. Pure orginal research and definitely should not be said without a specific source.
• 21:1721:17, 11 September 2013 diff hist +32‎ The Princess Bride (film) ‎ fix citation quote parameter
• 21:1021:10, 11 September 2013 diff hist +21‎ UHF (film) ‎ accessdate was 2013-16-13 ha ha ha. Updated.
• 21:0421:04, 11 September 2013 diff hist −24‎ Nashville Rebel (film) ‎ Remove deprecated. Tidy infobox. "thru"? seriously?
• 21:0121:01, 11 September 2013 diff hist −158‎ Sara Sidle ‎ WP:RELTIME never say "recently" in an encyclopedia, "at the moment" is similarly poor wording. Say when if it is relevant. (Remove dead link was probably an episode summary. Looked like an unnecessary cite.)
• 20:1720:17, 11 September 2013 diff hist +113‎ Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎No edit summary
• 20:0520:05, 11 September 2013 diff hist +985‎ Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ →‎Flop: new section
• 19:4119:41, 11 September 2013 diff hist −650‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Remove flop statements. Referenced but contentious and already covered in Box office section. Will bring to talk.
• 19:2319:23, 11 September 2013 diff hist +30‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ Box office mojo says the budget was $1.2 million but I'd like another opinion and for someone else to agree the figure $1.5 should be changed in the article body. Also tidy a ref and fix a link.
• 19:1219:12, 11 September 2013 diff hist +102‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ Remove outdated tag marking section as unclear. Regroup adding Box office heading and adding Accolades (Awards section). Some release information intermixed but clearer than before and more like the format recommended by WP:MOSFILM
• 19:0519:05, 11 September 2013 diff hist −39‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ Malformed reference, strip back to bare URL. IMDB Trivia not normally acceptable. Citation needed WP:RS
• 18:5918:59, 11 September 2013 diff hist +3‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ WP:MOSFILM suggests "Home media" as the section heading.
• 18:5618:56, 11 September 2013 diff hist +134‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ Cleanup of Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic. Number of reviews needed for adequate context. Sites did not exist until long after the films, important to say "retrospectively".
• 18:4918:49, 11 September 2013 diff hist +13‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ WP:MOSFILM and WP:RTMC. Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic are critical response and only existed many years after the film. Move below critics.
• 18:4618:46, 11 September 2013 diff hist +108‎ Reservoir Dogs ‎ Clarify? Was going to add a named reference to make it clearer where the budget figure came from but budget in infobox does not match budget in article.
• 18:4118:41, 11 September 2013 diff hist +399‎ Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film ‎ →‎Stricter Box office guidelines
• 16:3416:34, 11 September 2013 diff hist +87‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ See talk. Also warning message in source in infobox. Finally explained: BOM does not properly update the subtotals. Undid revision 572502169 by 200.30.220.241 (talk)
• 14:0514:05, 11 September 2013 diff hist +18‎ Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series) ‎ Remove unnecessary subheading. Format link as a reference. Source tidy and consistency fixes.
• 13:3513:35, 11 September 2013 diff hist +368‎ Talk:Box Office Mojo ‎ Box Office Jedi
• 13:2913:29, 11 September 2013 diff hist +1,236‎ Talk:Box Office Mojo ‎ Warning not always reliable, subtotals not correctly updated.
• 13:2913:29, 11 September 2013 diff hist −648‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Was going to add a named reference but no need to repeat THR article 616590 at all. Do not say "now" WP:RELTIME. Shorter quote. TMI not WP:RS, and not actually referenced. How did this edit get accepted? Flop section is sourced but contentious.
• 13:0813:08, 11 September 2013 diff hist +530‎ User talk:Acalamari ‎ Article lock may no longer be necessary.
• 13:0113:01, 11 September 2013 diff hist +1,056‎ Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Gross explained: Box Office Mojo sucks.
• 12:5312:53, 11 September 2013 diff hist +162‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ The dodgy box office numbers was the whole reason for this article being locked. Warning necessary.
• 02:5802:58, 11 September 2013 diff hist +702‎ Talk:The Host (2013 film) ‎ Older comment needed context as it is now less clear which edits it was in response to.
• 02:5102:51, 11 September 2013 diff hist +8‎ The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones ‎ Box Office Mojo puts gross at $37 million (The Numbers still substantially ahead, calling it $49 million, still below $50 million. Sticking with BOM as the default)