14 September 2015

• 13:4013:40, 14 September 2015 diff hist −86‎ HeLa ‎ rm MOS violations, misuse of brackets, and lifting of text from source
• 13:3613:36, 14 September 2015 diff hist −152‎ Sabine Lisicki ‎ →‎2009: Breakthrough year: citations go after facts, and a link to her twitter feed is not sufficient here
• 13:3413:34, 14 September 2015 diff hist −490‎ Llanfairpwllgwyngyll ‎ →‎In popular culture: rm spam, cruft and hyperbole
• 13:3313:33, 14 September 2015 diff hist −102‎ Instinctive drowning response ‎ copying and pasting text from sources is not acceptable. we use our own words.
• 13:3113:31, 14 September 2015 diff hist −2‎ Lift (force) ‎ →‎False explanation based on equal transit-time: the fact that it is incorrect is not an inconsequential aside, so what possible reason could there be for putting it in brackets?
• 13:2713:27, 14 September 2015 diff hist −5‎ Dog anatomy ‎ →‎Touch: this is not the 1920s. we do not pretend that women don't exist.
• 13:2513:25, 14 September 2015 diff hist −5‎ Dog anatomy ‎ →‎Smell: we write our own words. copying and pasting from a source in this way is never acceptable. also corrected grammar
• 13:2413:24, 14 September 2015 diff hist −3‎ 2006 Wimbledon Championships ‎ →‎Streaker incident: better writing
• 13:2213:22, 14 September 2015 diff hist −96‎ 2006 Wimbledon Championships ‎ disappointing for americans, maybe.
• 13:1913:19, 14 September 2015 diff hist −16‎ Tap water ‎ one way of saying things is better than two
• 13:1913:19, 14 September 2015 diff hist −24‎ Richard Parks ‎ incorrect capitalisation and bolding
• 13:1713:17, 14 September 2015 diff hist −25‎ John Roll ‎ link clarity
• 13:1613:16, 14 September 2015 diff hist −43‎ Richard Parks ‎ →‎737 Challenge and other Expeditions: everest is not a pole, and a reference was in the wrong place. they go after facts, not in the middle of them or before them.
• 13:1413:14, 14 September 2015 diff hist 0‎ Harriet Harman ‎ →‎Loyalty: basic error. you're not citing the fact that the sunday times reported something. you're citing what it was that they reported. interrupting a sentence to put a citation in the wrong place is very bad writing