11:5011:50, 16 August 2014diffhist−136
Nellie Bly
certainly completely unchaperoned because she was not a young person at a social event being accompanied by an adult. also encyclopaedic tone is preferred to copying biased material
09:5709:57, 16 August 2014diffhist+3
Clement Vallandigham
→Death: people seem to love putting things in needless brackets and quotes. And the kind of grammatical error that results in meaningless attributions is increasingly widespread as people try to fewer words than are needed to express points
04:1504:15, 16 August 2014diffhist+70
Messier 82
best to make sense. explain what is meant by prototype rather than just sticking it in the middle of the sentence with a citation to further interrupt things
12:4212:42, 9 August 2014diffhist−1,004
List of deadliest aircraft accidents and incidents
way too much relevant text removed from the article; when you begin with three notes and even the notes section begins with a note, you know you're going too far. Placed relevant material into the article text, removed redundant duplications
12:3612:36, 9 August 2014diffhist−32
Argentine Military Cemetery
what nonsense. political motivation is as clearly expressed now as before. what is removed is the implication that they were somehow being crafty devils and cunningly "knew" something that the British had inexplicably overlooked
12:2312:23, 9 August 2014diffhist−5
Itavia Flight 870
pointless to interrupt the very first sentence of the article after precisely nothing has been established. better to put this information somewhere sensible, like in the text