4 July 2022
- 15:2815:28, 4 July 2022 diff hist +1,396 User talk:GrahamHardy →Orphaned non-free image File:TheGirlTheGoldWatch&Everything.jpg
- 15:1715:17, 4 July 2022 diff hist +209 The Mind of the Maker Work does indeed bear a dedication in Latin, but apart from a citation telling us what it says, this sentence is WP:OR. Also noting that full bibliographic information is needed when drawing content from a book (publisher, page number, etc.). Given the lack of page numbers, URLs, and citations supporting specific sentences, am adding ((refimprove to the article.
- 15:0915:09, 4 July 2022 diff hist +23 The Mind of the Maker →Literary significance and criticism: Altered the Brooks citation to ((cite book, to remove red warning for lack of URL. Made section template message more understandable.
- 15:0315:03, 4 July 2022 diff hist −33 The Mind of the Maker →Literary significance and criticism: Removed editorialising in the open to the second quote, and corrected a mistake in the blockquote markup.
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