08:1208:12, 22 January 2012diffhist−96
Ross Sheppard High School
→Notable alumni: I'd be very surprised if this were true - can't find room for it in his biography. One source said he finished HS in Indiana (presumably while with the Racers), which would be before he lived in Edmonton. At minimum, cite.
03:0803:08, 19 December 2011diffhist−52
Symphonic rock
This paragraph (the whole article, really, but this one was especially bad) read like it was written by someone just learning English; reworded it to be much less awkward.