23 September 2023

• 17:3317:33, 23 September 2023 diff hist −223‎ Fred Astaire ‎ Restructured sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:2717:27, 23 September 2023 diff hist −75‎ Fred Astaire ‎ →‎Death: We cannot possibly include language that describes a person's last wish without a source to support it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 September 2023

• 17:1317:13, 20 September 2023 diff hist −4‎ Yukon ‎ Sorry, kitty stepped on keyboard right as I hit publish! Corrected the mistake. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:1217:12, 20 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Yukon ‎ Corrected misspelling. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 September 2023

• 22:4122:41, 12 September 2023 diff hist −103‎ Jake Lacy ‎ Removed unnecessary language, not appropriate for encyclopedia content. Separated sentence that had an unnecessary semicolon. Periods and commas are the workhorses of the English language and should be punctuation of first choice. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 September 2023

• 22:0022:00, 9 September 2023 diff hist +60‎ Inky Johnson ‎ Improved source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:5721:57, 9 September 2023 diff hist +156‎ Inky Johnson ‎ Made style corrections, removed content not verified by sources, corrected sources and added a section. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 August 2023

• 05:0605:06, 31 August 2023 diff hist +102‎ Steve Cropper ‎ Fixed style, grammar and source errors. Removed unnecessary quotation. Always paraphrase quotations except in rare instances. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 August 2023

• 19:2519:25, 29 August 2023 diff hist −10‎ Cat Stevens ‎ Fixed style and grammar errors. Tag: Visual edit

27 August 2023

• 17:3617:36, 27 August 2023 diff hist −8‎ Charles M. Blow ‎ Removed time reference "current." "Current" as of when? The minute his job changes this becomes an inaccurate statement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 August 2023

• 19:0319:03, 26 August 2023 diff hist −44‎ Ruth Etting ‎ Removed unnecessary words and restructured sentences for better style and readability. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 August 2023

• 17:2017:20, 24 August 2023 diff hist −6‎ Geodis Park ‎ Removed link that does not exist Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2023

• 18:4518:45, 22 August 2023 diff hist −406‎ Derrick Henry ‎ Since Wikipedia articles are to be a summary of the facts of the subject, quotations rarely achieve that limited goal. They should be either removed or paraphrased. In this case, paraphrasing was not necessary since the only thing the quote did was to prove what was already sufficiently stated in four simple words in the previous sentence. Also, we need to make efforts to not simply cut, paste and quote information from third parties, but to paraphrase there, also. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:3618:36, 22 August 2023 diff hist −9‎ D. J. Moore ‎ Removed unnecessary word. The word "previously" is almost never needed, if ever. When you make the verb past tense, that indicates "previously." Also removed a comma. A simple compound sentence does not need a comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 August 2023

• 04:2004:20, 21 August 2023 diff hist −34‎ Shane Fontayne ‎ Removed peacock language. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2004:20, 21 August 2023 diff hist −65‎ Peter Barakan ‎ Fixed section, removing style errors and unnecessary content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 August 2023

• 20:2920:29, 14 August 2023 diff hist −68‎ Walter Pidgeon ‎ Removed editorial content, specifically "...that his popularity reached its height." That is when Pidgeon's popularity was at its height? Says who? There is no source for such a statement, which makes it an editorial comment, which is never allowed. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:2520:25, 14 August 2023 diff hist −892‎ Walter Pidgeon ‎ Removing editorialized content. Recast sentences to reflect proper Encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:1120:11, 14 August 2023 diff hist −56‎ Walter Pidgeon ‎ Corrected content to conform to encyclopedia style. Tip to editors: never write "as well as." "And" is always the preferred use. Never used three words when one word is sufficient. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:0820:08, 14 August 2023 diff hist −38‎ Walter Pidgeon ‎ Removed unnecessary content. We do not have to mention that Pidgeon had two marriages, we simply need only to mention the two marriages and people can count. Also, he did not marry the "former Edna Muriel Pickles." She wasn't the "former" Ms. Pickles until after they married. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:0020:00, 14 August 2023 diff hist −93‎ Walter Pidgeon ‎ Removed unnecessary con tent, and corrected grammar. Added a location and corrected a style error. Walter Pidgeon probably died eight days after a lot of people. Simply because someone with whom he had starred died eight days prior to him by is not relevant information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 August 2023

• 06:3006:30, 7 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ All This, and Heaven Too ‎ →‎Cast Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3006:30, 7 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ All This, and Heaven Too ‎ Fixed my error Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2806:28, 7 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ All This, and Heaven Too ‎ →‎Cast Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2706:27, 7 August 2023 diff hist −104‎ All This, and Heaven Too ‎ →‎Cast: Removed redundant links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0906:09, 7 August 2023 diff hist +739‎ Talk:Bette Davis ‎ →‎Bette Davis and the Hollywood Canteen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:4605:46, 7 August 2023 diff hist +206‎ Talk:Bette Davis ‎ →‎Unbelievably bloated article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3805:38, 7 August 2023 diff hist +10‎ Talk:Bette Davis ‎ →‎Unbelievably bloated article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3605:36, 7 August 2023 diff hist +783‎ Talk:Bette Davis ‎ →‎Unbelievably bloated article: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

6 August 2023

• 21:1321:13, 6 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Dan Haggerty ‎ Restructured the awards list, so it was in a form that made sense to the reader. Just as fair warning, I am researching some of the claims made in this awards list, and I'm having trouble substantiating some. Those that cannot be verified will have to be deleted. I am digging deeply to try to substantiate them, even emailing the founders and/or presidents of the organizations involved. I hope I will be able to verify then. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:0921:09, 6 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ Kanab, Utah ‎ Corrected grammatical error. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:3220:32, 6 August 2023 diff hist +93‎ Dan Haggerty ‎ Restructured some sentences for proper style and better readability. Removed a questionable source and added a respected source. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:4017:40, 6 August 2023 diff hist −108‎ Johnny Unitas ‎ The source did not indicate that this subject was the first superstar of the game and one guy putting him in his top 10 quarterbacks does not indicate that this subject is "consistently" considered one of the top 10 quarterbacks of all time. Please do not editorialize in Wikipedia. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 August 2023

• 22:5622:56, 4 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ Tania Harcourt-Cooze ‎ Corrected misspelling Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5522:55, 4 August 2023 diff hist −138‎ Tania Harcourt-Cooze ‎ Again, tightened sentences and removed unnecessary or unsourced information. A note to editors: at some point we do have to say the name of our subjects instead of continuously using their pronouns. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5022:50, 4 August 2023 diff hist −66‎ Tania Harcourt-Cooze ‎ Tightened sentences, removed unnecessary words. How does being "directly related" to someone differ from simply being related to someone? "Directly" is a worthless word in that sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:4622:46, 4 August 2023 diff hist −25‎ Tania Harcourt-Cooze ‎ Removed banner. Saying that the article "needs to be updated" is very vague and unhelpful. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 July 2023

• 23:2023:20, 30 July 2023 diff hist −17‎ George Jung ‎ Restructured sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Corrected links and added one. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 July 2023

• 15:1715:17, 22 July 2023 diff hist −125‎ Freddie King ‎ Fixed style errors and writing errors. Removed source that led to a scam site. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 July 2023

• 02:2702:27, 20 July 2023 diff hist −359‎ Little Big Town ‎ Corrected style errors and removed unnecessary quotation. Please note that quotations, while allowed in encyclopedia writing, are discouraged. Encyclopedia writing is a style unlike any other. We write only facts using the fewest, most direct words possible. Quotations rarely achieve that tight sentence structure. If the content of the quotation is necessary, paraphrase it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:2102:21, 20 July 2023 diff hist −51‎ Little Big Town ‎ Corrected style errors Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1902:19, 20 July 2023 diff hist −126‎ Little Big Town ‎ Restructured content to tighten sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1202:12, 20 July 2023 diff hist −106‎ Little Big Town ‎ Removed first names. In encyclopedia writing we use last names only except in rare circumstances. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0902:09, 20 July 2023 diff hist −670‎ Little Big Town ‎ Restructured content and reworded content to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 July 2023

• 17:1117:11, 18 July 2023 diff hist −33‎ Phil Lynott ‎ Removed inclusion of the attendance of a particular person at the funeral for this subject. According to all I have read, there were many people at that funeral. The only time where it would be appropriate to acknowledge a person's attendance over others would be if that person was a head of state. Otherwise, it's just another person attending a funeral. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4716:47, 18 July 2023 diff hist −55‎ Thin Lizzy ‎ Corrected grammar and style errors. A band, such as Thin Lizzy, is a single unit and is an "it" not a "they." Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 July 2023

• 14:1614:16, 17 July 2023 diff hist −45‎ Yukon ‎ Removed unnecessary words. "Also" is almost always an unnecessary word in encyclopedia writing. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:0705:07, 17 July 2023 diff hist −970‎ Robert Osborne ‎ Continuing to restructure sentences to reflect proper encyclopedia style. A note to editors: encyclopedia style is different from any other style of writing. We write only facts using the fewest, most direct words. Tags: references removed Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2104:21, 17 July 2023 diff hist −559‎ Robert Osborne ‎ Remove superfluous content and tightened sentence structure to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1304:13, 17 July 2023 diff hist −91‎ Robert Osborne ‎ Tightened sentence structure to reflect proper encyclopedia style. Removed unnecessary words and paraphrased a sentence that was a quote from the source without having been put in quotations. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit