00:4400:44, 4 April 2023diffhist+27
King Kong
→lede: +((By whom)): with current wording, it's a vague real-world attribution for which there are no references (nor is the subject followed-up upon later in the article except in-universe)
24 April 2022
05:5205:52, 24 April 2022diffhist−25 m
E Ink
rm quantification: only cited source doesn't support this assessment
12 April 2021
22:1822:18, 12 April 2021diffhist+41 m
Joystick
→lede: further refinement: non-breaking spaces to prevent disconnection from enumeration; pluralize suction cups: two are visible
10 April 2021
02:0202:02, 10 April 2021diffhist+52
Joystick
→lede: anchor "VG joystick" and "hat switch" in image caption; reword caption to clarify that not all VG joysticks necessarily have those features
05:4505:45, 5 March 2020diffhist−10
Zendrum
→History: rm circular wikilink; de-embolden "Synthaxe Drumitar": the lede clearly specifies Zendrum is based on it, so it can't be another name for article subject
18:3618:36, 29 January 2020diffhist−3,306
The Central Park Concert
→Personnel: hyphens/N-dashes → M-dashes; rm unneeded non-breaking spaces; simplify instrument listing and linking; rm exhaustive production listing per WP:IINFO: lacks any context or obvious need, missing dozens of credited personal, and info is available on more appropriate archival platforms, including IMDB
10:2110:21, 19 November 2019diffhist−93
Colonialism
rm recently-added short description: even for a brief description, far too generalized and ignores associated imperialism (ie. sounds like nation building rather than conquest)
10:1210:12, 19 November 2019diffhist−24
Louise Slaughter
→lede: "Chairwoman" → "Chairperson": House tends to use the latter in official publications; "obtaining" → "earn": one earns their degree; minor condense/trim of material for concision/brevity
09:5909:59, 19 November 2019diffhist−9
Louise Slaughter
→lede: correct tense: despite her death, the district continues to exist and still encompasses Rochester and Monroe County; reword district numbering date; rm whitespace
02:0402:04, 29 March 2019diffhist+3,406
DVD
move info not exclusive to recordable discs into a new "Specifications" sub-sec; expand section to include DVD-10, -13, and -14; other misc. copyediting
19:3719:37, 27 March 2019diffhist+103
DVD
rm redundant mentions of transition pause and recording speed; +((Cn)) for rec. speed and recorder costs; misc copyediting for clarity, brevity, grammar, syntax, etc. per WP:MOS, WP:WEASEL, WP:NOTGUIDE, et al.
17:5217:52, 19 October 2018diffhist+3 m
Virus
"those that cause AIDS" → "HIV": rm needlessly oblique wording; +"or even sabotage": HIV doesn't simply evade, but cripples immune response
17:4517:45, 19 October 2018diffhist−47 m
Virus
rm "antibiotic" reference: self-evident and irrelevant (might as well mention that allergy meds, anti-rejection meds, homeopathy, leeches, trepanation, et al "have no effect" either…)
23:4223:42, 19 March 2018diffhist−24
IBM Works
→lede: correct tense: though well out of favor, it continues to be an office suite, still includes the mentioned applications when installed, and is still included in BonusPak; minor copyedit; update external link
18 March 2018
22:2622:26, 18 March 2018diffhist+26
Tachyon
move Sept. 2011 info from lede and move to history per WP:LEDE: a specific event in which the particles were NOT found is irrelevant to the general introduction of the subject; correct caption to remove "we" per WP:YOU