7 April 2021
- 03:2803:28, 7 April 2021 diff hist +782 Haruka Weiser Added detail on early life and education of Haruka Weiser. Deleted the "page redirect to nowhere" Tags: Removed redirect Reverted Visual edit
20 February 2020
- 05:5305:53, 20 February 2020 diff hist −119 Killing of Latasha Harlins 3 changes were made. (1) Based on consensus, "shot in the head" was changed to "fatally shot. (2) I reordered things to make more sense: specifically to (a) crime, (b) punishment, and (c) link between Latasha's death and the riots. (3) I removed the sentence about Westchester high school which appears in both Background, and the info box to the right. It seemed like an outlier, but if you think it should be re-added, please do so. Tag: Visual edit
19 February 2020
- 23:0923:09, 19 February 2020 diff hist −52 m Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: no violation)
- 23:0723:07, 19 February 2020 diff hist +3,889 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: no violation)
- 11:5311:53, 19 February 2020 diff hist +4 m Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Need citation for Jury recommendation
- 11:5211:52, 19 February 2020 diff hist +38 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 11:5211:52, 19 February 2020 diff hist +373 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Need citation for Jury recommendation: new section
- 11:4611:46, 19 February 2020 diff hist +193 Killing of Latasha Harlins List was incomplete, added more penalties levied on Du from FindLaw and the Stevenson book. Refrained from mentioning 10 year suspended sentence, since probation implies it. Goodfaith comments and edits are definitely welcome. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:1911:19, 19 February 2020 diff hist +1,610 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 03:1403:14, 19 February 2020 diff hist +57 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 03:1303:13, 19 February 2020 diff hist +1,859 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link: replying to Grayfell
18 February 2020
- 22:5722:57, 18 February 2020 diff hist 0 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: no violation)
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- 22:4422:44, 18 February 2020 diff hist +122 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 22:4422:44, 18 February 2020 diff hist +8 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 22:4322:43, 18 February 2020 diff hist +10 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 22:4322:43, 18 February 2020 diff hist +96 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 22:4222:42, 18 February 2020 diff hist +1,310 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Primary video link
- 22:2822:28, 18 February 2020 diff hist +724 Talk:Killing of Latasha Harlins →Bias, "altercation," link to video, and grammatical issues.: new section
- 22:0322:03, 18 February 2020 diff hist +73 Killing of Latasha Harlins Undid revision 941483326 by Grayfell (talk) Tag: Undo
- 22:0222:02, 18 February 2020 diff hist +17 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: )
- 22:0122:01, 18 February 2020 diff hist +14 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: )
- 21:5921:59, 18 February 2020 diff hist +29 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →Grayfell reported by User:Editgram (Result: )
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- 21:4621:46, 18 February 2020 diff hist +7 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →User: reported by User:MrX (Result: )
- 21:4521:45, 18 February 2020 diff hist +1,789 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring →User: reported by User:MrX (Result: ): new section
- 21:0821:08, 18 February 2020 diff hist +73 Killing of Latasha Harlins Undid revision 941481022 by Grayfell (talk) I think you're deliberately misunderstanding me about sources, but that's alright. If you respect accuracy, I will leave "shot in the head" if you allow "altercation" otherwise, I'll have to go to the editors. Tag: Undo
- 20:5820:58, 18 February 2020 diff hist +61 Killing of Latasha Harlins Undid revision 941479646 by Grayfell (talk): I agree assault is not neutral, but altercation definitely is neutral. "Shot in the head" is definitely not neutral: and part of a racist tendency in history to disrespect the bodies of non-white individuals through over-exposure. The video is a primary source, and primary sources are generally accepted for historical accuracy. I'm not sure why you disagree with splitting the sentences. Tag: Undo
- 20:5020:50, 18 February 2020 diff hist −9 Killing of Latasha Harlins Fixed grammar. Korean-born is like saying Russian-born, or African-born. Korea-born is better, but the writer's intention to emphasize "foreign" characteristics makes the use of "foreign-born" more accurate. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4720:47, 18 February 2020 diff hist +82 Killing of Latasha Harlins Used neutral language to further describe incident with citation, then separated run on sentence into two sentences. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2720:27, 18 February 2020 diff hist −12 Killing of Latasha Harlins Not neutral. Tag: Visual edit
7 February 2020
- 21:2621:26, 7 February 2020 diff hist +10 Tomb of the General There were too many translations of the Tomb of the General which inhibited readability, so I parsed it down to three. I improved grammar, flow, and diction according to encyclopedic tone. Tag: Visual edit
3 February 2020
- 22:3822:38, 3 February 2020 diff hist +14 m Killing of Latasha Harlins Added more detail on the incident. Current description seems to intentionally obfuscate what happened. Tag: Visual edit
10 January 2020
- 07:1107:11, 10 January 2020 diff hist +412 Hanwoo No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0407:04, 10 January 2020 diff hist +612 Hanwoo Added reasons for "premium" label that was already on the page. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5406:54, 10 January 2020 diff hist −23 Hanwoo "Korean Native" doesn't make any sense. There are dozens of breeds native to Korea. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5306:53, 10 January 2020 diff hist −5 Hanwoo contemporization of language. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5206:52, 10 January 2020 diff hist +9 Hanwoo Hanwoo makes up less than 1% of 1% of global beef production and is typically 6x the price of Angus. Tag: Visual edit
15 July 2019
- 22:3922:39, 15 July 2019 diff hist +3 m Asian Dust →International conflict
- 22:3922:39, 15 July 2019 diff hist +604 Asian Dust →International conflict: The changes more accurately express the central idea of the article, and have been pulled directly from the abstract of the study.
- 22:3122:31, 15 July 2019 diff hist +1 m Asian Dust →Negative externality
- 22:3022:30, 15 July 2019 diff hist +59 Asian Dust No edit summary
26 June 2019
- 22:5622:56, 26 June 2019 diff hist −133 South Korea in the Vietnam War →Reported war crimes and atrocities: Speculative and repetitive.
- 22:5022:50, 26 June 2019 diff hist +263 South Korea in the Vietnam War →Causes: There was a misrepresentation of Jiyul Kim's seminar paper "U.S. and Korea in Vietnam and the Japan-Korea Treaty." The previous writer solely emphasized the economic reasons for Korea's entry into the war, in direct contrast to the actual paper which on page 2 states "characterizing Korea's involvement in Vietnam in purely economic terms ignores the significant military and political factors involved." I've also added historical context of the broader proxy-war conflict.
3 April 2019
- 03:5503:55, 3 April 2019 diff hist −2 Battle of Ansi No edit summary
- 03:5403:54, 3 April 2019 diff hist −1 Battle of Ansi No edit summary
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