13:4913:49, 21 April 2019diffhist−121
User:Yanjie Dong/sandbox/aritcle1
1) fixed some grammatical errors. 2) I think personal hobbies should not be included as per wikipedia customs? 3) Regarding Beijing Film Academy, I think we should not go too deep into the subject as this can be further discussed in the university's own article. I opine that we should focus on JiaNaiLiang himslef to prevent derailment of topic, that's all for the moment