18:5018:50, 1 February 2023diffhist−54
Service catalog
Dramatically reduced stickiness of opening sentence by removing many glue words. Specifically, "that can be performed by for or within" shortens easily to "within" as it makes "within the company" refer to the subject of the sentence, the service catalog, instead of the services within the catalog.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
18:4218:42, 15 October 2019diffhist−12
MX record
Changed "blackmail" and "whitemail" to "onemail" and "twomail" to avoid negative associations with "blackmail" and white & black potentially being interpreted as related to race. Changed to neutral numbers instead.
06:4006:40, 23 May 2018diffhist+8
Weapon
guns to axes: guns are not simple weapons like clubs. also added "weapons" after biological for proper grammar and flow
05:0905:09, 23 May 2018diffhist+36
Gateway (telecommunications)
Cleaned up the lead portion significantly, moved a lot of the detailed information into a new heading called "Network gateway", and referenced the OSI model. Cleaned up the IP network section: changed IP to IPv4 and added a note and reference about IP versions.