00:0200:02, 14 January 2010diffhist−138
Charles Manson
per talk page comments, not an improvement, created non-accurate multiple adverbial phrases, poor wording flow, bad use of grammar
23:4223:42, 13 January 2010diffhist−343
Charles Manson
please don't use weasel phrases like "it is believed" or "surmised by researchers"; his name was registered 3 weeks later
03:5503:55, 8 January 2010diffhist−384
Charles Manson
non-sequitur; this ignores the sources used and the source that quotes the hospital record and the other rationales for the change; pls do not edit war over this.