12:3112:31, 25 April 2023diffhist−28
Maria Branyas
Tidied up and reverted some edits by Knowledgekid87: thank you for a very helpful clean-up, and most of my reversions here are stylistic. I think some chunkier paragraphs contained too many distinct ideas, and some of the rewordings perhaps lost the original emphasis/clarity of writing. Happy to pursue on talk page to seek consensus.Tag: Visual edit