21:3021:30, 5 March 2024diffhist−276
Murder of Sarah Everard
WP:AGF edits, but we don't need this here (it's out-of-place, and already mentioned at the end of the lead). We should also avoid duplicating references; this source is already used and can be called using <ref name="Inquiry Part 1" />Tag: Manual revert
20:3720:37, 4 March 2024diffhist+26
Murder of Sarah Everard
→Angiolini Inquiry: quotes is fine, but it's really not helpful to readers. what are the certain offences? If we can't specify what offences the Home Secretary is referring to, are we simply propagating the govt's weasel words, and is this therefore a meaningless addition? rw previous with specific reference.
19:1019:10, 4 March 2024diffhist+100
Murder of Sarah Everard
dup links, add Kent Police to Couzens's background – we hadn't explained why Kent Police could have stopped him (i.e. we hadn't said that he had been an officer with them)