02:1302:13, 7 December 2023diffhist+5
Jakarta
made start of paragraph consistent with the rest of the paragaph about SINKING. Please do not impose knee-jerk global warming OR that contradicts the evidence in this case.
06:5806:58, 23 November 2023diffhist−101
Billy Rose
→Life and work: Reworded generalization: Carole King, Leonard Cohen, and many others "after Rose" started as writers before recording as performers. Is the trend explained in this paragraph actually in the cited source, though?
08:5808:58, 17 November 2023diffhist−978
Donald Rumsfeld
→Secretary of Defense (1975–1977): cut paragraph based on biographical sources (i.e., essentially self-published recollections), East Timor refers to Fretilin as center-left and says Guterres was a member while President in 2017 -- this makes "communist insurgency" in the deleted paragraph sound like a nervous POV rather than a political fact
08:5708:57, 11 November 2023diffhist−534 m
Lacy (song)
→Composition: cut reference to "reception" misplaced in Composition section, also seems like Undue Weight regarding number of sources presented for this hypothesis that runs against writer's own motivation