19:3619:36, 22 April 2020diffhist+1 m
Ozark (TV series)
Befor the edit, the sentence coud be read to mean that Nelson killed Helen and Navarro, and that Nelson then told Marty and Wendy that they would cooperate more. By adding the comma, this potential misunderstanding of the sentence's meaning is eliminated.
17 July 2019
19:1819:18, 17 July 2019diffhist−160
ER season 7
The deleted text incorrectly described the events of the episode and incorrectly suggested that the death of the demented old woman was the fault of her doctors, and not the fault of the police officer who left his gun unattended or the officer that shot her. The text I added is both more accurate and less agenda-driven.