5 June 2024
- 23:3723:37, 5 June 2024 diff hist +962 Talk:3M22 Zircon →Kinetic Energy Seems Wrong: new section Tag: New topic
1 June 2024
- 22:3822:38, 1 June 2024 diff hist +142 M101 howitzer →Canada: The Canadian C3 105mm howitzer has a significantly longer range than the M1 and M2 howitzer specifications listed previously in the article. References the Canadian Department of National Defence web site. current
4 October 2023
- 00:5200:52, 4 October 2023 diff hist +406 Yonge Street →Construction of Yonge Street: Notice from John Small on responsibilities for new settlers along Yonge Street.
9 July 2023
- 17:4817:48, 9 July 2023 diff hist +104 Artillery fuze →Description: inertia arming lacked information on how this is used in mortars.
31 May 2023
- 19:0419:04, 31 May 2023 diff hist +14 Lambda calculus too much technical jargon in the intro - Some topics are intrinsically technical, but editors should try to make them understandable to as many readers as possible.
12 September 2022
- 23:3023:30, 12 September 2022 diff hist +116 Traveling Wilburys →Background: Added correct name of the band members... according to the album cover
10 September 2022
- 05:5705:57, 10 September 2022 diff hist −2 4th Canadian Division Updated allegiance to King Charles III
19 February 2022
- 20:2220:22, 19 February 2022 diff hist +12 Constitutional monarchy canada
6 January 2022
- 17:5817:58, 6 January 2022 diff hist +457 Talk:Julian calendar Help make articles to be better understandable to laymen.
8 September 2021
- 17:2717:27, 8 September 2021 diff hist +250 Talk:Henri Cartier-Bresson →Implied Conflation of Street Photography With Candid Photography
- 17:1017:10, 8 September 2021 diff hist +563 Talk:Henri Cartier-Bresson This this needs to be clarified as people are defining street photography partly on his work, and worse only on cherry picked examples of it.
16 July 2021
- 15:5115:51, 16 July 2021 diff hist +993 User talk:Lopifalko →You don't get to define what street photography is
15 May 2021
- 04:5504:55, 15 May 2021 diff hist +473 User talk:Lopifalko sick of arrogant editors
10 May 2021
- 03:5403:54, 10 May 2021 diff hist −3 m Street photography This is a minor edit Tag: Reverted
- 03:5303:53, 10 May 2021 diff hist −6 Street photography people are trying to put this subject in their own box. many of the greatest street photographs are indeed mediated. Tag: Reverted
- 03:5103:51, 10 May 2021 diff hist +86 Street photography street photography is not also called candid photography. Street photography can include candid photography, but not all street photography is candid photography, and not all candid photography is street photography. Tag: Reverted
4 April 2021
- 18:1318:13, 4 April 2021 diff hist +25 Faith (dog) ACU
1 April 2021
- 18:0918:09, 1 April 2021 diff hist −11 Basset Hound →Appearance: Using the English language which is what an encyclopaedia is supposed to do, rather than have people needing to jump pages frequently just to understand what is being said.
16 February 2021
- 01:3501:35, 16 February 2021 diff hist +84 River Forth Adding a bit of information to the introduction so those like me who are not intimate with Scotland can have a sense of where it is immediately. Laymen should be able to get information quickly.
- 01:2401:24, 16 February 2021 diff hist +70 Firth of Clyde When I looked it up, I wished it had said right near the top whether it was on the east or west coast of Scotland, me not being from the UK. So after having to unnecessarily go to yet another page to find out, I fixed the issue here.
21 January 2021
- 18:0218:02, 21 January 2021 diff hist +12 m Pericardial effusion Changed dyspnea to "shortness of breath" since the latter is understandable to laymen (what an encyclopaedia should be). Also dyspnea actually redirects to "Shortness of breath"
9 January 2021
- 08:3908:39, 9 January 2021 diff hist +495 Talk:Loretta Lynn Very important Vancouver BC connection is missing
- 08:3508:35, 9 January 2021 diff hist +332 Talk:I'm a Honky Tonk Girl Loretta Lynn was discovered in Vancouver
- 08:3408:34, 9 January 2021 diff hist +331 Talk:Zero Records adding info to hopefully correct errors
19 September 2018
- 05:2005:20, 19 September 2018 diff hist −1 Thompson River Changed the source and mouth elevation to match those given in the source articles for those locations. e.g. Kamloops elevation was originally over 1000m when in reality it is 345m according to references in the Kamloops wiki page. I spotted the error as I know Kamloops well and knew the valley bottom was between 300 and 400m so found the exact value to fix the page. Lytton, the mouth has to be lower because rivers flow downhill. :)
18 June 2018
- 09:3409:34, 18 June 2018 diff hist −1 McLure Ferry Fixed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:3309:33, 18 June 2018 diff hist −3 McLure Ferry Fixed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 June 2018
- 07:4807:48, 17 June 2018 diff hist +279 McLure Ferry Adding a couple photos of the ferry (reaction ferry)
24 January 2018
- 03:2303:23, 24 January 2018 diff hist +175 Talk:Trans-Pacific Partnership →Photo is wrong: new section
29 November 2017
- 00:1700:17, 29 November 2017 diff hist −250 White Oaks Secondary School Removed opinion from the first paragraph that had no substantiated reference (only a link to the schools physical address page). Opinions in general should not be included in articles.
7 October 2017
- 01:4101:41, 7 October 2017 diff hist +9 Janice Rand Yeoman linked to Star Trek uniforms instead of to an article explaining what a yeoman actually is.
29 August 2017
- 19:1219:12, 29 August 2017 diff hist +26 m Unnormalized form No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0819:08, 29 August 2017 diff hist +143 Unnormalized form Added the idea that repeated fields are also not 1NF Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0219:02, 29 August 2017 diff hist −24 Unnormalized form Cleaned up opening paragraph. The overview and history needs to be fixed too. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0317:03, 29 August 2017 diff hist −278 Data redundancy →In database systems: clean up for clarification
28 August 2017
- 23:3823:38, 28 August 2017 diff hist +207 Unnormalized form →Example: Reorganizing and rewriting the paragraph to try and bring better clarity.
- 22:5322:53, 28 August 2017 diff hist +168 Unnormalized form →Example: Unnormalized in multiple columns too
7 August 2017
- 17:4717:47, 7 August 2017 diff hist +1,056 Talk:Morquio syndrome →Too Technical: reply to comment. Provide link to a good example of how a general encyclopedia should read for laymen to understand. Sure there is room for tech speak, but after.
- 17:1217:12, 7 August 2017 diff hist +319 Talk:Sea louse →Needs Fixing or Create New Page for Other Types of Sea Lice: new section
- 17:1117:11, 7 August 2017 diff hist +832 Talk:Sea louse →Readable by Laymen: new section
- 17:0117:01, 7 August 2017 diff hist +18 Sea louse Changed the link to copapods to read the way it is supposed to. That is, understandable by a layman. The link allows the reader to access more technical info. Like how this is supposed to work. Articles need to stop reading like a doctoral dissertation.
30 July 2017
- 04:3404:34, 30 July 2017 diff hist −1 Talk:Morquio syndrome Putting the 'too technical' section on top as this article needs to be cleaned up so lay people can understand what it is saying.
- 04:3304:33, 30 July 2017 diff hist +863 Talk:Morquio syndrome →Too Technical: new section
- 04:2604:26, 30 July 2017 diff hist +30 Morquio syndrome This article is too technical. It reads like a medical book. Encyclopaedias, including Wikipedia (as part of its guidelines) is supposed to provide meaningful in formation that is digestible by laymen.
23 June 2017
- 05:4905:49, 23 June 2017 diff hist −32 Naliboki massacre There is no evidence that jewish partisans participated in the massacre, a point noted later in this same article.
18 June 2017
- 22:0622:06, 18 June 2017 diff hist +443 2016 Fort McMurray wildfire Added the number of people evacuated to the opening paragraph as it should be there for a complete summary. Following numbers also don't make sense without it.
31 August 2016
- 20:1620:16, 31 August 2016 diff hist 0 m Talk:Timber rattlesnake →Common names: minor edit. bulleted my addition for clarity
- 20:1320:13, 31 August 2016 diff hist +577 Talk:Timber rattlesnake →Common names: Articles should be written for laypeople. Laypeople do not use Latin names.
- 02:1602:16, 31 August 2016 diff hist +32 Nephrotic syndrome too technical, needs to be understandable by lay people
30 August 2016
- 20:0120:01, 30 August 2016 diff hist +11 User:Theshowmecanuck →Me current
