30 January 2022
- 22:0022:00, 30 January 2022 diff hist +1 m Suits (American TV series) Correction.
- 21:5821:58, 30 January 2022 diff hist +5 m Suits (American TV series) Series type accuracy.
- 21:5421:54, 30 January 2022 diff hist +24 m Suits (American TV series) Clarity.
- 21:5221:52, 30 January 2022 diff hist +6 m Suits (American TV series) Clarity.
- 21:4721:47, 30 January 2022 diff hist +3 m Suits (American TV series) Tweak.
- 21:4321:43, 30 January 2022 diff hist +121 Suits (American TV series) Finished off the paragraph for power.
- 21:2821:28, 30 January 2022 diff hist +14 m Suits (American TV series) Two-word tweak of last edit.
- 21:1721:17, 30 January 2022 diff hist +328 Suits (American TV series) A super-makeover to match the impact of the first episode of this great show.
25 November 2021
- 01:1101:11, 25 November 2021 diff hist +6 m Philosophy of religion →Overview: No hiding behind parens. I would prefer: "God & Gods" but I accept the need to be inoffensive, but without sacrificing power.
20 September 2020
- 02:0202:02, 20 September 2020 diff hist +679 Talk:David A. Sinclair →Sinclair article is Terribly inadequate considering importance / public interest: new section Tag: Reverted
26 August 2017
- 10:0910:09, 26 August 2017 diff hist +549 Talk:Contarex →Need some current and period data: new section
20 August 2017
- 11:0511:05, 20 August 2017 diff hist +881 Talk:Pleroma →I think this subject is without sufficient gravity to be a separate entry.: new section
- 01:3501:35, 20 August 2017 diff hist +81 m Talk:Novikov self-consistency principle →An extension for Consistency Doctrine: Added signature.
- 01:3001:30, 20 August 2017 diff hist +920 Talk:Novikov self-consistency principle →Relation to Uncaused Paradox: As stated, original research for comment.
19 August 2017
- 23:3423:34, 19 August 2017 diff hist −51 Frank J. Tipler →Reception: Section needed help to remove redundancy and various inconsistencies, and perfect clarity.
- 23:2023:20, 19 August 2017 diff hist +34 m Frank J. Tipler →Reception: Clarified comparative sentence and meaning of "FAP".
- 23:1323:13, 19 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Frank J. Tipler →The Omega Point cosmology: Minor but significant theological correction that is fair to all readers. Alternative gets more complex, and would require a paragraph. This is a good sum.
28 July 2017
- 01:2101:21, 28 July 2017 diff hist +89 m Stylometry →History: Filled out an observation to a complete thought.
- 00:5800:58, 28 July 2017 diff hist 0 m The Urantia Book →Overview: Comma oops.
- 00:5500:55, 28 July 2017 diff hist 0 m The Urantia Book →Overview: Syntax tweak to reduce ambiguity, without breaking style.
8 May 2017
- 00:3400:34, 8 May 2017 diff hist +4 m GiveDirectly →History: WIKI WORD in place of text
8 October 2016
- 05:1805:18, 8 October 2016 diff hist −1 m Arthur Schopenhauer →Heredity and eugenics: Cleanup of previous.
- 05:1505:15, 8 October 2016 diff hist +402 Arthur Schopenhauer →Heredity and eugenics: Technical clarification commonly omitted, re: heredity vs genetic.
30 September 2016
- 22:4222:42, 30 September 2016 diff hist 0 m David Ben-Gurion →Attitude towards Arabs: Since this is a transcription of an oral speech, I think the best approach is to use a COLON to separate preface from paraphrasing, rather than a comma.
14 September 2016
- 19:4219:42, 14 September 2016 diff hist +7 m Genetic programming Added clarifying what GA is (used later)
1 September 2016
- 09:4809:48, 1 September 2016 diff hist −1 m Tauopathy edited biased / judgemental / extreme claim.
- 09:4309:43, 1 September 2016 diff hist +9 m Tauopathy sentence clarification of subject.
25 August 2016
- 22:4922:49, 25 August 2016 diff hist −604 New Jerusalem Deleted grossly inaccurate section of introduction (wrong attribution under heading - is Jewish commentary to Ezekial by Rabbi Malbim). Balance better suited to body of text. I think the intro is fine without additional detail.
21 August 2016
- 04:0304:03, 21 August 2016 diff hist +35 m Deus Ex (video game) →Role-playing elements: Tweak fix.
- 04:0204:02, 21 August 2016 diff hist −192 m Deus Ex (video game) →Role-playing elements: deleted weapons minutia as obvious, unnecessary detail.
- 03:5403:54, 21 August 2016 diff hist +44 m Deus Ex (video game) Clarified sub elements / types of game this is.
19 August 2016
- 21:5821:58, 19 August 2016 diff hist +2,254 Nascent iodine (dietary supplement) A bold edit to improve the article - also see talk comments regarding the need for a Cayce-centric article that may be a section under Iodine as Medicine
31 July 2016
- 22:1422:14, 31 July 2016 diff hist +12 m Roy Rogers →Early life: Clarify one spot
- 22:1022:10, 31 July 2016 diff hist +52 m Roy Rogers →Music career: Improve clarity of name use
12 June 2016
- 03:1403:14, 12 June 2016 diff hist +548 Cord Meyer →CIA career: 3 more sordid details.
25 May 2016
- 05:3205:32, 25 May 2016 diff hist +559 Talk:Edward Irving Complaint about the style if original or lack of attribution if not.
17 May 2016
- 04:0604:06, 17 May 2016 diff hist +11 m Sirolimus →Coronary stent coating: Sentence rephrased to eliminate ambiguity of meaning.
1 May 2016
- 11:3411:34, 1 May 2016 diff hist +9 m Epistle to the Colossians →Composition: Essential clarification to establish sequence
- 10:4810:48, 1 May 2016 diff hist +1 m Proselytism →Limits: Separate paragraph of major sub-topic
- 04:4404:44, 1 May 2016 diff hist +17 m Lateran Palace →16th-century alterations: Run-on sentence and tense fixed. Still slightly ambiguous.
- 03:1603:16, 1 May 2016 diff hist +73 m Religious pluralism Add missing photo caption.
19 April 2016
- 02:4902:49, 19 April 2016 diff hist 0 m 1999 Martha's Vineyard plane crash →Possible contributing factors: Assist narrative by switching paragraph order to more chronological. SEEMS BETTER.
12 April 2016
- 08:3808:38, 12 April 2016 diff hist +549 George Bernard Shaw →Beliefs and opinions: Added key referral to Methuselah play
1 March 2016
- 01:0701:07, 1 March 2016 diff hist +2 m ReactOS →Internal audit: Separated 2 important legal highlights into paragraphs for demi-bullet-style attention.
27 January 2016
- 10:1910:19, 27 January 2016 diff hist +12 m Ramon Llull added the 3 language article links.
17 January 2016
- 07:3207:32, 17 January 2016 diff hist 0 m Tribe of Ephraim →Tribal territory: No negation called for, was "BUT" is "AND"
- 02:5502:55, 17 January 2016 diff hist +23 m Talk:Book of Genesis →Edit was sloppy
- 02:4902:49, 17 January 2016 diff hist +535 m Talk:Book of Genesis →Date corrections + talkback response
16 January 2016
- 19:1519:15, 16 January 2016 diff hist +2,788 Talk:Book of Genesis →Regarding from "When these texts were created": new section
1 January 2016
- 12:5012:50, 1 January 2016 diff hist +34 m Age of Enlightenment →Sociology, economics and law: Link to article not diambig. HAD A PROBLEM WITH SHORTER LINK TYPE!
