21:4821:48, 28 April 2024diffhist−4
The Epoch Times
copyedit. It wasn't clear if: Toosi noted 1 (that some observers say...) and 2 (that the paper is connected...). Or if: Toosi noted that some observers say 1 (that Falun Gong uses...) and 2( (that the paper is connected). I checked this source and it seems the latter.Tag: Visual edit
11:2211:22, 22 April 2024diffhist−43
Media coverage of the Israeli–Palestinian conflict
ce lede sentence; remove implied qualifiers. The phrase "by journalists in international news media", does not add any meaningful qualification to "media coverage" that wouldn't already be reasonably assumed. Furthermore, the scope of the article includes academic discussion and social media, so restricting to news would not an accurate summary of the article.Tag: Visual edit