"monuments in the 2015 calendar" should that be "on the 2015 calendar"
Done
"only very slightly" I don't think we need the word "very", slightly will suffice.
Done
"neutral zone" - can you link to that term? I am not sure what it means in Cycling terms.
Done
Same with the term "peloton" is there a link that could be added?
Done
"These including the" should be "These included the"
Done
"who came off the back of a", not sure I like the way this is phrased, I cannot put my finger on it though. Perhaos something like "who came into the race with a victory..."?
Done
"his teammate for this race.", I assume that team mate was Alexander Kristoff?
Done
"them, eventually to no avail" I would remove the word "eventually"
Done
"little later, when it" no need for a comma
Done
"leading at a maximum of half a minute." = how about "leading by half a minute at one point."
Hmm, the source says that he created a gap of half of minute which I would read as that this was the maximum gap. Writing "half a minute at one point" would indicate that the gap might have been bigger at one point, so I prefer the current wording, since it is more precise about the nature of the attack.
I think the second paragraph can be expanded past a single sentence can't it?
I guess you mean the lead? Then Done
Table - is it normal for results tables in cycling to not be sortable?
No, this is not normal, and I do not quite understand why that should be necessary in the case of a result table? It is supposed to be sorted from first to tenth, no other sorting really has any purpose...
- @Zwerg Nase: - I believe that's the complete review for now. Not a lot to address which is what we expect for GA status so good work so far. I am putting the reivew on hold for up to 7 days to allow for improvements to be made. Let me know when you are ready for me to look at this again. MPJ-US22:32, 9 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Zwerg Nase: Based on a quick read through it looks good, issues seem to be addressed. I am just going to do one last read through to make sure nothing else jumps out at me.
Congratulations on a job well done. I am passing this for GA, the both will update it with the GA logo and I will update article class in a moment. MPJ-US00:58, 11 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]