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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs ) 17:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
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What is CC2 at the head of the infobox?
What's WOHA?
"in Museum planning area" in the Museum Planning Area.
Fixed
SOTA is defined but never used.
Consider linking "interchange" for non-experts.
"Marina Line" - capital L here for some reason, and does this actually exist?
World Architecture Festival has an article.
Fixed
"The Contract 825 ..." no need for The here.
Fixed
Image captions which aren't complete sentences should not have a full stop.
Fixed
"S$343.94 million " could this be converted to something more common, e.g. US$ or Euro?
"The contract also includes " included.
" on 10 June 2002.[4] On 15 March 2003," repetitive prose.
Fixed
"The station opened ..." avoid single-sentence paras.
Fixed
Infobox, what's referencing the postal address?
Fixed used street directory and yoursingaporemap.com
Infobox, what's DT21?
Infobox, bus and taxi don't need to be capitalised.
Fixed
' 42 metres (138 ft)),[10" spare closing parenthesis there
Fixed
the "deepest" and "longest escalator" records need context, i.e. deepest in the MRT ?
Fixed
' allows improvement in ' -> improves.
Fixed
"he ventilation shafts of the station also blended" replace "also" with "are".
"of view lines across" are "view lines" the same as "views"?
"civic buildings.[13][11]" ref order.
What is AIA?
"as part of the Art-in-Transit programme at the station" was this programme MRT-wide or just at this single station?
"The video also (re-)visits..." this whole sentence reads like a copy/paste from a travel blog.
Avoid SHOUTING in the refs.
Fixed
numerical ranges in ref titles should be en-dash.
Fixed That's all I have on a first pass. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!! ) 17:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Still some SHOUTING in the refs.
Fixed
What's LTA?
Ref 12 needs an accessdate.
The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!! ) 20:07, 22 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
@The Rambling Man : are there other outstanding issues needed to be fixed?--ZKang123 (talk ) 07:20, 28 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Ok, happy with the changes so promoting to GA, good work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!! ) 08:10, 31 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks!--ZKang123 (talk ) 08:12, 31 August 2020 (UTC) [ reply ]